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Title: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on April 26, 2013, 10:29:28 PM
Mr Mom came up with this wistful set of lyrics about memories of days past...Steve and I added to the lyric, which was then set to music.

Always conceived as a simple tune, it has been brought to life through the wonderful talents of my fellow collaborators.

Steve - Once again a super vocal, sang with authentic feeling and backed by the angelic Steve McAndrew choir. In addition, the wonderful Dave Gilmour-esque guitar playing enhances the song wonderfully.
Riggo - Your rhythm guitar parts glue the sound, a hidden star of the track.
Todd -  Another top class drums part, nicely bouncy, with tasty fills throughout.
Steffen - A great mix from you, and some well placed piano lines in there as well.

This one took some time to complete, but the end result was worth it. Thank you again guys.

Andy

Gone (Gupta/Scunziano/McAndrew) (c) 2012,2013

bpm=80

Intro
V1
D
Gone are the moments that made it all so real
B5           A                       D
Departed with our childlike dreams
D
Gone is the sunshine that chased shadows away
B5            A                                 D
Along with rainbows at noon of my rainy day

Gone are the outlines of a half remembered face
And with it many smiles which so caressed
Gone is the warmth & comfort contained within that smile
That fostered so many moments worthwhile

bridge/chorus
      G
And if I could retract
The lies and all the facts
D
Where would I be standing now
       G
And if I could change my tack
Regain the wind within my sails
D
Where would I be heading now
      G
And if I could take it back
What more would I do
Em                    A5               Bm
Would it make a difference to you

Guitar solo over D B5 A G D x2 and verse chords

verse2
Gone are the feelings replaced with emptiness
Gone are prior feelings of deep content
And gone is the hunger for to scale the lofty heights
Gone like a vanquished fool, who failed to pass the test

bridge/chorus repeated

half verse
Gone are my yesterdays now dissolved in the mists of time
Gone is the bridge that leads over this wall

Outro solo D B5 G A D

The Band:
John Scunziano (Mr. Mom) : lyrics
Steve McAndrew (Pleasuredome) : lyrics, lead & backing vocals, lead and fill guitars
Roger Wilkerson (Riggorog) : acoustic and electric rhythm guitars
Todd Vierra (Thunder) : drums, percussion
Steffen Offermann (Stoman) : electric piano, mix/master
Andy Gupta (AndyG6508) : lyrics, music, bass
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: riggorog on April 26, 2013, 10:44:57 PM
Awesome tune! Thanks for the invite to play on it. Great work all around and great final mix by Steffen :)
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Mr. Mom on April 27, 2013, 12:21:15 AM
Fabulous Andy, Steve, Roger, Todd, and Steffen. :) :)
Though my contribution was very minor (as usual - LOL), I really like where Andy and Steve went with this compared to the original lyrics.
Kudos to all... and a beer. 8)
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Pleasuredome on April 27, 2013, 12:33:20 AM
Thanks guys for yet another opportunity. :) :)

The song has a hint of a country feel. :o :o >:D >:D ;) ;) :) :)

I love that keys motif on the piano Steffen, understated brilliance!! 8) 8)

Andy, when is the album out? 8)
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: rightonthemark on April 27, 2013, 01:10:04 AM
nice job guys.
love the backing vox.
actually love the whole thing but those backing vox just set it on fire.
nice guitar work too.
oh heck...everyone did awesome.
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Thunder on April 27, 2013, 10:47:30 AM
Thank you my friends for letting me be the drummer.
Great work from all of you.
Thanks to all for the love. :)
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on April 27, 2013, 11:08:19 AM
Thanks Riggo, it's specially nice to get to record with you again, its been a while!

Andy

Awesome tune! Thanks for the invite to play on it. Great work all around and great final mix by Steffen :)
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on April 27, 2013, 11:09:21 AM
Hey John,

Your original lyric inspired everything that followed, you were the prime mover (now does that sound like a Rush tune or what :).

Andy

Fabulous Andy, Steve, Roger, Todd, and Steffen. :) :)
Though my contribution was very minor (as usual - LOL), I really like where Andy and Steve went with this compared to the original lyrics.
Kudos to all... and a beer. 8)
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on April 27, 2013, 11:12:56 AM
Hi Steve,

What can I say, your contributions shine like a crazy diamond!! The initial musical direction was something out Meddle or Obscured perhaps...

An Album - would be great, it could be done, would have work past the different musician sets, mixers and themes though :). Or maybe do enough songs group them thematically and put out three albums :)

Andy



Thanks guys for yet another opportunity. :) :)

The song has a hint of a country feel. :o :o >:D >:D ;) ;) :) :)

I love that keys motif on the piano Steffen, understated brilliance!! 8) 8)

Andy, when is the album out? 8)
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on April 27, 2013, 01:39:17 PM
Hey Mark,

Thanks for the kind comments. The backing vocals are indeed the icing on the cake.

Andy

nice job guys.
love the backing vox.
actually love the whole thing but those backing vox just set it on fire.
nice guitar work too.
oh heck...everyone did awesome.

Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on April 27, 2013, 01:39:50 PM
hi Todd,

It was a pleasure, great drumming from you!

Andy

Thank you my friends for letting me be the drummer.
Great work from all of you.
Thanks to all for the love. :)
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Casia - lyricist on May 02, 2013, 12:50:44 PM
Awesome.  Not sure what to say on this except very enjoyable.  I always love your compositions Andy, you know that.  And, Steve always pulls off a great vocal no matter what.  Great mix from Steffen as always.  And Mom, nice lyric.

Todd and Roger - great contributions as always - very creative and consistent in all your music, love what you guys do.

This one rather has the feel of an anthem and almost makes we want to stand at attention :)

Casia
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 02, 2013, 02:15:33 PM
Thank you Cass, you are always very kind to animals and my music.

The guys pulled in great performances topped off with Steffen's excellent mix. Its who you know you know :).

 ;D Please stand by attention by all means when this song is on, just make sure your facing into the strong breeze coming from the north. They have lots more to spare from over there. Its 17 degC today but snowed yesterday.

Andy

Awesome.  Not sure what to say on this except very enjoyable.  I always love your compositions Andy, you know that.  And, Steve always pulls off a great vocal no matter what.  Great mix from Steffen as always.  And Mom, nice lyric.

Todd and Roger - great contributions as always - very creative and consistent in all your music, love what you guys do.

This one rather has the feel of an anthem and almost makes we want to stand at attention :)

Casia
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Zax on May 02, 2013, 02:34:38 PM
Nice!!!  I too enjoyed the listen  :).

Frank
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 02, 2013, 07:34:39 PM
Thanks Frank glad you liked it.

Andy

Nice!!!  I too enjoyed the listen  :).

Frank
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Casia - lyricist on May 03, 2013, 07:48:56 AM
Yeah, seems we're getting the nice weather lately.  It was sunny and 26 yesterday - OMG too hot considering a week ago it was 2.  Our bodies were'nt meant to adjust so quickly.  However, we usually get your weather about a week later - so I know who to blame.  We need a mountain system in the middle of the country as a weather blocker.  Any extra land should be piled up just east of Manitoba.
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Casia - lyricist on May 03, 2013, 05:26:11 PM
BTW - I am very kind to animals  ;D.  Maybe more so than humans, cause they really should know better  ;D
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 03, 2013, 05:28:39 PM
 ;D thats well put Cass. We have a strange yellow object in the sky today - oh its the sun!!

Andy

BTW - I am very kind to animals  ;D.  Maybe more so than humans, cause they really should know better  ;D
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Casia - lyricist on May 03, 2013, 05:32:13 PM
LMAO - Glad you found it  ;D.  Better slather that sunscreen on, you're not used of it!!  I just bought SPF60 today, I'm rather fair and burn easily.  No sense looking older than I am  :D
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: cyclone on May 04, 2013, 12:30:09 PM
Andy,
  Did you slow this down?I remember it more as a rocker.I don`t know if that`s the right word but the feeling is different.Still a great song.Well done.
Cyclone
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 04, 2013, 04:57:54 PM
Hi Tim,

This song had been laying around for ages, I really can't remember how it used to be. The bpm didnt change, maybe the feel did a bit. I like the way it turned out though.

I just remembered that you had posted up an acoustic guitar sep, for use with a version with Mick on guitar. I dont think that's going to materialize, sorry about that man  :-[.

Thanks for the comments, I am glad you liked this one.

Andy


Andy,
  Did you slow this down?I remember it more as a rocker.I don`t know if that`s the right word but the feeling is different.Still a great song.Well done.
Cyclone
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: cyclone on May 04, 2013, 11:38:45 PM
Andy,
    No probs bro, I will try my hand again.I plead no contest to Roger. :)
Cyclone
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 05, 2013, 10:58:04 AM
HI Tim,

Rest assured your playing was fine!! It's just that the second version fell through. You are welcome to play on my songs anytime!

Andy

Andy,
    No probs bro, I will try my hand again.I plead no contest to Roger. :)
Cyclone

Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: stoman on May 05, 2013, 01:33:28 PM
Do I have Tim's seps too?

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 07, 2013, 10:11:27 AM
Steffen,

No, I dont think so, as they were to be used for the aborted second version. The seps are on the song thread though.

Andy

Do I have Tim's seps too?

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on May 11, 2013, 05:08:24 PM
I always love to hear Steve singing , especially when he takes on a slower number.

This is a really nice track guys, it sounds a little like a lost CBZ song.

CD
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 11, 2013, 05:32:53 PM
Hey Mark,

Thanks, comparison to a CBZ song is high praise indeed. I kind of felt a similarity too....

Steve's array of vocals are fabulous.

Andy

I always love to hear Steve singing , especially when he takes on a slower number.

This is a really nice track guys, it sounds a little like a lost CBZ song.

CD
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: NickT on May 22, 2013, 05:07:27 PM
Love it guys!

Steve- nice southern rock 2 part solo.  8)

Good song, Good production and grand performances by all!

NickT
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 24, 2013, 09:09:09 AM
Thanks so much Nick Im thrilled you liked the song!

Andy

Love it guys!

Steve- nice southern rock 2 part solo.  8)

Good song, Good production and grand performances by all!

NickT
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Billy on June 19, 2013, 01:20:48 AM
Catching up on the songs in the finished section.

Man, I missed this little gem. What a cracking , tidy song. Wonderful performances all round with the vocals really standing out. Nice work gentlemen.
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: Paulo on June 19, 2013, 05:28:39 AM
Oh, I missed this one... Beutifull all the way.
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on June 19, 2013, 01:16:24 PM
Thanks so much Billy. Yes Steve did a special job.

Andy
Catching up on the songs in the finished section.

Man, I missed this little gem. What a cracking , tidy song. Wonderful performances all round with the vocals really standing out. Nice work gentlemen.
Title: Re: Gone (Mr.Mom/AndyG/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Riggorog/Stoman)
Post by: AndyG6508 on June 19, 2013, 01:17:21 PM
Hey Paulo,

Glad you enjoyed the song :)

Andy'
Oh, I missed this one... Beutifull all the way.