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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Albino on May 09, 2014, 03:03:39 PM

Title: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Albino on May 09, 2014, 03:03:39 PM
Finally completed this song with the help from some offsite collaborators. It was originally posted up onto this site by WorryMort back in October 2010!
Since then I have been trying to develop my mixing skills, particularly since my drum kit has recently had to be dismantled for a little while.  >:(   I needed to find a way to pacify my creative side and this seemed to be an ideal way.


I really need a father
To keep me in a straight line
What would it cost to buy this misery
I'm hopeless and deflowered
Righteous in my dead eyes
Opening the wounds to show me who I am

I cannot be alone
I can't allow myself to think
The sands of time have really made this tomb for me
Suspense as sure as pain
Held within your cold hands
Pathetic at the end with a sense of relief

Chorus:
I only seem to whisper
When I really need to scream
I have too many thoughts
It's easier to whisper than to scream

Break:
I cannot fall asleep
That comfort has been taken
I only pass the time, a mystery to myself
Am I more valid?
Am I easy on the eye?
A reason for myself contemplating a life




Terry Hanley    - Guitars, Lead guitars
Stephen Smith -  Drums, Backing Vocals, Piano, Mix Master
Paul Hardman  -  Bass Guitar, Lyrics
Jonathan Kell   - Guitars, Backing Vocals
Lee Beddows   - Vocals

© 2014  Terry Hanley, Stephen Smith, Paul Hardman, Jonathan Kell, Lee Beddows
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (offsite project)
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 09, 2014, 06:18:10 PM
Hey Steve,

Brilliant song, great performances from everyone (super drumming!!) and a pretty decent mix to go with it.
I-podded!

Andy
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (offsite project)
Post by: Albino on May 09, 2014, 06:42:02 PM
Hey Steve,

Brilliant song, great performances from everyone (super drumming!!) and a pretty decent mix to go with it.
I-podded!

Andy

Thank you Andy, this truly was a labour of love. Thanks for your very positive comments  ;D I-podded...I am privileged  8)
I am Still trying to get my head around this mixing lark, every time I think I have finished a mix, I listen to it again and want to tweak something else!

Thanks for the listen Andy

Steve.

Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: PVD on May 09, 2014, 06:57:12 PM
Steve:

Very nice, like the progression in the lyric.  Well done, good mix.

Paul
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Albino on May 09, 2014, 07:20:13 PM
Steve:

Very nice, like the progression in the lyric.  Well done, good mix.

Paul

Thank you Paul, emotive words which compliment the music. The mix was fun to do, thanks for the listen.

Steve.
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: rightonthemark on May 09, 2014, 08:05:10 PM
i like the tune.
and the mix is very good in my opinion.
clear enough to hear everything.
sounds big & still has plenty of dynamics (not squashed)
great job.
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on May 10, 2014, 01:00:22 PM
Really nice song Steve...it reminded me of the later guitar based New Order type stuff.

CD
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Albino on May 11, 2014, 05:45:17 PM
Really nice song Steve...it reminded me of the later guitar based New Order type stuff.

CD
Thank you mark. I have a new respect for the producer now. They are the fifth beatle, the fifth Metallica member, the fifth Janes Addiction member, the sixth Guns 'n' Roses member, .... hold on that last one doesn't work, but you get my drift. A NEW FOUND RESPECT  ;D

I personally don't hear New Order but I do like the fact that you hear that.   >:D
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Albino on May 11, 2014, 08:03:59 PM
It sounds very rock to me  ;D
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: docmidnite on May 12, 2014, 02:42:50 AM
\m/... wow, this rocks!
Besides your super drumming I like the singer a lot...
I would think of Foo Fighters!
Also the mix sounds good!
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on May 12, 2014, 07:18:08 AM
It sounds very rock to me  ;D

Like something off the ' Get Ready ' Album...maybe Primitive Notion ?
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: DrumGuy on May 12, 2014, 09:53:05 AM
Love this song Steve! Great lyrics, vocals, and mix. And of course I love the drumming!!!  ;D

Mark
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Billy on May 12, 2014, 10:38:06 AM
Manic Street Preachers, vibe?

Enjoyed this, Albsy lad. Imagine this on "Later with Jools Holland".

Rock on, brother!

Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Albino on May 14, 2014, 04:27:09 PM
\m/... wow, this rocks!
Besides your super drumming I like the singer a lot...
I would think of Foo Fighters!
Also the mix sounds good!

Thanks a lot Doc  ;D

I have passed on the compliments to the singer, he is very happy  :D
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Albino on May 14, 2014, 04:28:00 PM
Love this song Steve! Great lyrics, vocals, and mix. And of course I love the drumming!!!  ;D

Mark

Thanks mark  8)
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Albino on May 14, 2014, 04:30:27 PM
Manic Street Preachers, vibe?

Enjoyed this, Albsy lad. Imagine this on "Later with Jools Holland".

Rock on, brother!


Thanks Billy.
It would be great to be on "...Jools Holland" but I think he would have something to say about my piano playing!
Where abouts are you from, bro?
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Albino on September 19, 2014, 08:22:40 PM
I have not  consider this but thanks to this site's  reminders....120 days since anyone has  replied to this hunk of a song.,




What Can I say... Here IS THE SONG!!!!
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Zax on September 19, 2014, 09:54:09 PM
Hey Steve,

This is really good, Dude!!

Don't know how I missed this the first go around... but I'm glad I heard it now.   8)

Frank
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: AndyG6508 on September 19, 2014, 10:25:21 PM
I've always liked it Steve!

Andy
Title: Re: Whispers And Screams (Albino/WorryMort)
Post by: Albino on September 20, 2014, 03:54:28 AM
Thank you boys  8)

I've always liked it Steve!

Andy

I know ANdy  ;D  ;) ;)  8)