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Title: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: docmidnite on June 25, 2014, 10:29:25 AM

Here´s another one of my mid-tempo off-broadway-pop(c) songs...
Introducing Jardim Asli, a new MCS member from Germany

Thank you guys!!!

MrMom: Lyrics
Cyclone: accoustic guitar
Jardim Asli: Bass, guitar and orchestration
me: vocals, mix

Don´t believe them
(c)2014 Lyrics: John Scunziano, Music: Henry Mittnacht

Don’t believe – the things you hear
The world has many views
Don’t believe that the guy next door
Will tell you what is true

Knowledge comes and knowledge goes
And most of it’s for sale
If you know the truth, stand your ground
Lies are all around

Don’t believe in the wisdom of strangers
There’s a reason they’re lying to you
They will seldom ever tell the truth

Don’t believe them… trust the ones who care
Don’t believe them… you’re being led astray
Don’t believe them… here and gone today
Don’t believe what they say to you
Don’t believe it’s true

Don’t believe… the passing thoughts
Of your fair-weather friends
Don’t believe there’s an easy way
You get what you deserve

People seek, more than they earn
Hard work has its reward
And you know it’s true, you get from life
Just what you put in.

Never look for sympathie
In those who say what you wanna hear
Promises of silly things
You know, can´t come true

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: rightonthemark on June 25, 2014, 01:50:28 PM

welcome aboard the mcs train Jardim.
what a great first collab here.
i like the tune, the production and all the performances.
great job gang.

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: Mr. Mom on June 25, 2014, 08:56:31 PM

Now that's the way to hit the ground running Jardi 8) 8)
I predict lots more from one of our newest members.

Great job Henry, Tim,  and Jardi :)

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: Jardim Asli on June 26, 2014, 04:02:33 AM

Thanks a lot for your kind comments rightonthemark and Mr.Mom.  :)

cheers

Asli

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: PVD on June 26, 2014, 09:33:50 PM

Everyone:

Well done, very well crafted lyric John.

Paul

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: Zax on June 27, 2014, 08:57:02 PM

Very, very nice!!!

Welcome to MCS, Asli!!

Great job to all involved!   8)

Frank

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: cyclone on June 28, 2014, 01:17:18 PM

Wow you guys are good.Exceptional job thanks for letting me be a part.
Cyclone

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: docmidnite on June 30, 2014, 05:57:39 AM

Hey guys,
thanks a lot sofar for listening and commenting! :-*

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: Billy on July 10, 2014, 02:24:02 AM

Very impressive production and performances. Radio ready.

You're becoming quite the producer, Doc. I love your arranging on this and of course, the vocals are stunning.

Welcome Asli.

Great work guys.

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: Tricia41 on July 11, 2014, 10:30:36 AM

Very nice song, guys! Nice work everyone!  8)

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: billybrock on July 12, 2014, 11:30:19 AM

Being a new member myself, I haven't listened to many finished songs. This is the best so far. Well done to all those involved.

Billy w

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: Errol on July 21, 2014, 04:28:45 PM

Very nicely done , gentlemen!

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on August 29, 2014, 05:34:36 PM

Hey sweet mid tempo Ballad Doc !  I can see you on stage now off Broadway belting this one out  8)

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: docmidnite on October 03, 2014, 10:41:47 AM

Quote from: billybrock on July 12, 2014, 11:30:19 AM

Being a new member myself, I haven't listened to many finished songs. This is the best so far. Well done to all those involved.

Billy w

Tric, Errol and Mark...thanks for chiming in and listening.

Biily, thanks a lot... a big compliment, wow! :-[ :)

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: SmithC on November 08, 2014, 11:58:58 PM

Great feel poured in  :)

Brilliant work....

Smithie

Title: Re: Don´t believe them - ballad, 70bpm (Mr Mom, Cyclone, Jardim Asli, me)
Post by: AndyG6508 on November 14, 2014, 11:41:36 AM

Very well written, performed and produced!!

Sounds great, well done guys.

Andy