Musicians Collaboration Studio
Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: gbm on November 21, 2018, 04:22:18 PM
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I forgot to post this, this is my version of the song.
;D
Lyrics :John Vaughan
Guitars and Midi: Gary Miller
Vocals: Dom Mercurio
Production: Dom Mercurio, Gary Miller
I want to be your Romeo
serenade you at your window
Send you flowers keep the promise
true loves yours if you want it.
YOU WANT IT
I want to be your Romeo
hold your hand everywhere we go
Carve our names on an old oak tree
scratch a heart for eternity
I want to be your Romeo
I want to be your Romeo
I want to be
If I was your Romeo you could be my Juliet
I'd bring you love untold, you'd never once regret-
That I am your Romeo to your Juliet
each tender kiss, would never allow you to forget
I want to be your Romeo
tell me how- I need to know?
I've held this love so long inside
this hearts' been waiting and can't hide
I want to be your Romeo
Through summer days winter storms
Wishes together on silver stars
dance until the early hours
I want to be your Romeo
I want to be your Romeo
I want to be
If I was your Romeo you could be my Juliet
I'd bring you love untold, you'll never once regret-
That I am your Romeo to your Juliet
each tender kiss, would never allow you to forget
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That's nice Gary....Can you send me the vox-less?
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Dom
I can't find the files, they're here somewhere, your vocals are good as is. I'll continue looking for the files and post if/when I find them
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I'd like to keep the vox less for live performance... I don't want to the vox again
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Hi Dom
I found the files, except your vox sep
I'll post a voxless mix soon
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here's a voxless
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Thanks Gary...I will check it out tomorrow
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Hi Gary.
If you bring the vocal track up-front some more it'll be great. I think the rest of the mix sounds great.
It would also be great if we could get a nice lead track in the middle (1:45 to 2:21)
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I don't have your sep, it's here somewhere but I can't find it, so I can't mix the vocals up
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I don't have your sep, it's here somewhere but I can't find it, so I can't mix the vocals up
I've been listening a few times...There are a few parts I'm not too happy with, I'll see if I get a bit of time to do them over, I'll see what I can do
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here's a BU vocal idea
I want to be your Romeo (be my Romeo)
serenade you at your window (serenading me)
Send you flowers keep the promise (flowers sent from you)
true loves yours if you want it.
I want to be your Romeo (be my Romeo)
hold your hand everywhere we go (everywhere we go)
Carve our names on the old oak tree (On an old oak tree)
scratch a heart for eternity
I want to be your Romeo
I want to be your Romeo
I want to be
If I was your Romeo you could be my Juliet
I'd bring you love untold, you'd never once regret-
That I am your Romeo to your Juliet
each tender kiss, won't let you forget
I want to be your Romeo (be my Romeo)
tell me how I need to know? (now you need to know)
I've held this love for so long inside (Held your love so long)
this heart been waiting and can't hide (your heart's been waiting and cannot hide)
I want to be your Romeo (Be my Romeo)
Through summer days and winter storms (through the winter storms)
Wishes together on a silver star (On a silver star)
dance until the early hours
I want to be your Romeo
I want to be your Romeo
I want to be
If I was your Romeo you could be my Juliet
I'd bring you love untold, you'd never once regret-
That I am your Romeo to your Juliet
each tender kiss, won't let you forget
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https://www.dropbox.com/s/ct4nnzeodppnyv1/vox%20mix.wav?dl=0
Hi Gary
Here is the vocal track...Do a mix with it and then we could see about a lead, not sure how an electric guitar would sound...
I can see a nice piano lead I have someone in mind and he would be perfect for it if he has some time...send me a mix and I'll send to him.
Mimmo
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here's a new mix with the new vocal
maybe he can do a solo to this mix
I'll try to find the piano solo that I did a while back