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Offline Mimmo

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Thank to Dan'l and Jardim...And all of you for listening

Lyrics  :  Dan'l B Young  (off-site)
Guitars:  Jardim Asli
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and vocals: Domenic Mercurio


                           Dreams
Life is a song of sensitivity imagination and creativity.
Ever to belong within any love song.
With dreams in the make'n so incredibly.
Enjoying special moments ever so breath take'n.
         Dreams have a way of coming true while open arms await for you.
A desire we wish to awaken with  dreams in the make'n.
Enjoying special moments ever so breath take'n.
Sincerity and commitment with dreams in the make'n.
          So come on along, life is a song.
Love and romance carries on endlessly.
Dreams never felt wrong, with you coming along.
with out any hearts break'n senselessly.
              You enter my dreams before I ever do.
And I hear your voice but can't see you.
Soon to discover we will find one another,
dreams in the make'n come true.
While open arms await for you
dreams in the make'n come true.
« Last Edit: August 22, 2014, 07:16:35 PM by Mimmo »
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Offline stoman

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Nice old-fashioned composition, Mimmo. Maybe some more movement on the bass track?

The guitar solo is too short! I want to hear more of it. :)

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Thanks Steffen...Unfortunately the bass track was one that came with the BIAB creation I tried a few other ones but couldn't find anything better. You're right the solo is a bit short , but  fits in nicely.

Thanks for listening
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Offline billybrock

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Good Vocal Mimmo. Excellent tone, and phrasing.

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Offline CosmicDolphin

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Nice vocals Mimmo

I like the song, maybe could use a little more swing as the backing feels a bit stiff.

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