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Offline McLovin

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Hey Ya'll.

Here's a new one from me with some help from Lino performing some stellar guitars. Enjoy! :)

Lost And Found
Music and Words:Jay Lamothe
Guitars:Lino Gonzalez


V1: Lucid these dreams, or though so it seems
I wake to find it's not there, what ends to the means
Forsake a new day, and go on my way, where will it lead?

V2: And then you appear, and lull does the fear
Of what I've lost won't be found, mislaid souvenir
Break a new day, accept it's ok, to love once more I say

CH1: You are not what I deserve, but I'll live and I'll learn
I can't find the reasons or words to explain
But care for you is what I'll claim,
What's lost has been found once again

V3: The smell of your skin, is where it begins
Euphoria does announce itself from within
Embrace this new day, A place I will stay, and love once more I say

CH2: You are not what I deserve, but I'll live and I'll learn
I can't find the reasons or words to explain
But care for you is what I'll claim,
What's lost has been found once again

CH3: You are not what I deserve, but I'll live and I'll learn
I can't find the reasons or words to explain
But care for you is what I'll claim, carefully I will reclaim
What's lost has been found once again
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Offline Donna

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What an interesting structure, Jay, with the semi-abstract, Olde Worlde way of expressing the thoughts.  (At least that's how they feel to me. ;) ) In any case, it's effective. The music & melody are wonderful of course, with stunning guitar. Good job, both of you. :)
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Offline docmidnite

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  • Rock on, dude
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Offline Paulo

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Nice pop song
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Respect
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Offline SmithC

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This one I would love to hear over and over again.....

Great work Jay and Lino  :)

Smithie


Offline McLovin

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Thanks all for the kind comments.. and I love your description of the lyric structure Donna.  Didn't really think about when I wrote it but you are spot on.
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Offline PVD

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J:

Nice structure and really intense (to me), made me want to see where it was going.  Enjoyed it.

Paul


Offline CosmicDolphin

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Very nice Jay.

Takes you on a bit of a journey , the guitar parts fit perfectly with the mood of the song.
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Offline r4m

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Great stuff bro! Sounds killer as usual!  8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)


 

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