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Offline Sharpola

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Here's an oddball tune that finally came together with help with lyrics from MM & Noel

Enjoy!

I catch the rays
Trace the breeze
Smell the ocean over me
With sand sifting slow
Through my toes

I paint the sky
The birds I see
Flying circles gracefully
But how will I know
Where they go

The sun is setting soon
My sun is setting soon
But oh you worry, not today
'cause its Sunday

A stroke of blue
Edged in white
Ebbing beauty from the light
Orange red maroon

I brush the dunes
From my eyes
A farewell tear I will cry
But somehow they know
I must go

No more looking back
We walk the beach
Feel the water
Lap our feet
And it's cool
How the blue sky makes us feel alive
Cause it's Sunday


« Last Edit: February 19, 2007, 12:43:13 AM by Sharpola »


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Ray -

That is awesome!

I still say you need to let me borrrow that muse of yours!

Nice piece of art.

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REALLY nice song Ray. Kind of reminds me of Supertramp, with a touch of Beatles and a lot of you. Some cool changes. Most of the songs around here I'll just open up to listen but when I see one of yours I automatically save knowing I'm going to dig it. Geez. I think I have close to an albums worth of your tunes now. Anyways another nice tune bro.  8)

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Ray,

I think it sounds awesome...  And I'm glad I could jump into one where you needed a hand...  You dug out a few of my lyrics from the CC abyss a year ago and have continued to pick them up along the way (as well as many other lyricists work)...  Much appreciated...

I'm not a big Beatles fan, but the "orange red maroon" screamed Beatles to me when I wrote it...  and your delivery proved it...

I hope in the end it was what you were looking to convey in the song... life's a beach, but it must go on...

Cheers,

Mike


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Ray,

Just listened again. I forgot about this song.

This is just freakin' great.

Mike and noel - lyrics are very trippy.

This is just a joy to listen to.

Nick
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Hey Ray be fun to play with this 2,ps ur bro Todd :)
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Have to agree with Nick..a real joy to listen to Ray, congrats! :)
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