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Offline McLovin

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Wow Doc.  This is fantastic!!

Very very impressive all around!!
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Offline AndyG6508

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Hey Henry,

Another great tune!!

Strong melody, lyrics and solid production.

The playing is first class - your guitar work ( as usual), sublime orchestration by Bill, super bass playing by muso (great note selection and tone btw).

Henry, I enjoy your singing - you have a very good voice which suits the material you write perfectly. You have a clutch of great tunes by now - Oh no, Hollywood Girl, Wounded Healer ..and now this one!

Well done
Andy
« Last Edit: May 11, 2011, 07:45:18 AM by AndyG6508 »


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Nice tune Henry. Sounds great and nice vocals.  8) It seems low in volume though. I had to turn it up.  ???

Dave



Offline r4m

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GeeeeeeZ!!! Nice one doc!! Great song!!
Great job on vox and everything!  ;)

Great job everyone involved!! 8)



Offline CosmicDolphin

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Excellent song Doc, really good piece of writing. The production is very good too.....the only thing I would have like to hear different is the first verse ....because it's fairly sparse you can hear the heavy ( almost nuclear !)  compression on the vocals and I think it's a bit too strong for that section as it brings up alot of noise and compression articfacts.  The way to cure it is split that part onto a seperate track and use different settings just for that bit.

Sorry to be picky  ;D But I know you like to hear these things...Great stuff.

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Excellent song Doc, really good piece of writing. The production is very good too.....the only thing I would have like to hear different is the first verse ....because it's fairly sparse you can hear the heavy ( almost nuclear !)  compression on the vocals and I think it's a bit too strong for that section as it brings up alot of noise and compression articfacts.  The way to cure it is split that part onto a seperate track and use different settings just for that bit.

Sorry to be picky  ;D But I know you like to hear these things...Great stuff.

CD


Offline CosmicDolphin

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Excellent song Doc, really good piece of writing. The production is very good too.....the only thing I would have like to hear different is the first verse ....because it's fairly sparse you can hear the heavy ( almost nuclear !)  compression on the vocals and I think it's a bit too strong for that section as it brings up alot of noise and compression articfacts.  The way to cure it is split that part onto a seperate track and use different settings just for that bit.

Sorry to be picky  ;D But I know you like to hear these things...Great stuff.

CD
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Fantastic Henry.....lovely work, great composition, brilliantly done  :) :)

Loved the end too  8)

Smithie


Offline Paulo

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So nice  ;)
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Nice Song! Well Done! ;D
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