Hi Barry,
Contrary to what others are saying about your song.
I listened to the verse and the words were to drawn out
You have a nice voice backing was pleasant.
But the pace of your lyrics are far too slow, shame because
melody was pleasant enough but in all honesty it needs a lot
of work. If you prefer to listen to praise from a few
Amateurs , that's okay, but after thirty years experience
of writing performing and working in A and R , I know what
I'm talking about.
You only get honesty from me no bullshit.
Hope this helps.
