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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: barryboomer on November 18, 2012, 04:55:13 PM

Title: CHRISTMAS IN NEW YORK (Original Song and Video)
Post by: barryboomer on November 18, 2012, 04:55:13 PM

NYC during Christmas is a Magical Time

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rf17IJE0rIA&feature=plcp

Thanks,
Barry Contact me at bdbutler@centurylink.net

Title: Re: CHRISTMAS IN NEW YORK (Original Song and Video)
Post by: Cisco on December 29, 2012, 09:08:14 AM

Hi Barry,

Contrary to what others are saying about your song.

I listened to the verse and the words were to drawn out

You have a nice voice backing was pleasant.

But the pace of your lyrics are far too slow,  shame  because

melody was pleasant enough but in all honesty it needs a lot

of work.                If you prefer to listen to praise from a few

Amateurs , that's okay, but  after thirty years experience

of writing performing and working in A and R , I know what

I'm talking about. 

You only get honesty from me  no bullshit.

Hope this helps.

Title: Re: CHRISTMAS IN NEW YORK (Original Song and Video)
Post by: Mr. Mom on December 30, 2012, 07:48:01 PM

Hi Barry,
This probably doesn't mean much, coming from an amateur, but I enjoyed the video and the music.  :) :)