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Title: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Vincent on July 22, 2010, 10:11:16 AM

We could of added more to this song however I have so many songs on the go i just figuered I would finish it as is.

Can always add to song in future some time.

Vincent (writer,composer,Lyrics,Vocal Melody,Guitar,Bass,Keyboard,Mix)
Tricia (Vocals,Vocal Melody,Lyrics)
CHHays (Drums)

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Benny on July 23, 2010, 09:13:55 AM

This is a nice simple, pleasant song. I like it. :)  This one could benefit by having a bunch of backing vocals surrounding Tricia's nice lead vocal.

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Vincent on July 23, 2010, 10:49:39 PM

Thanks Benny

Yeah the song could use some additions.

I like the way the song sounds however its not very interesting for the listener...its a decent little tune however its pretty much the same from beginning to the end...Song doesnt build up to anything and has very little dynamics.

I like it though...good melody.

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: nitch on July 24, 2010, 06:49:01 AM

I really like the simplicity of this song.  Sure its kind of repetitive but it works perfectly.

Catchy chorus.

Sounds great.

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Tricia41 on July 24, 2010, 06:52:12 AM

Thanks for the nice comments.  :)

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Studioplayer on July 27, 2010, 04:43:06 PM

Yeah. Nothing wrong with simplicity. Tricia has a great voice for this song and it sounds great as it is. I like it a lot.  :) 8)

Dave

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Vincent on July 29, 2010, 05:28:34 PM

Thanks Studio

 8)

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Tricia41 on July 29, 2010, 05:52:10 PM

 :) thanks Dave.  :)

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: soulfrontier on July 30, 2010, 11:41:22 AM

another nice tune from the great duo Vincent/Tricia!
Its a very good song and it reminds me one more time of Fleetwood Mac. very well done you both!

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Paulo on August 02, 2010, 01:48:01 PM

I like it... Catchy keyboards line and cool vox melodie.

Yeh, there's nothing wrong with siomplicity, this one is the prove.

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Vincent on August 02, 2010, 07:38:52 PM

Thanks paulo

 8)

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: cyclone on August 08, 2010, 11:11:49 PM

Another great song Vincent even when you think it`s missing something your songs turn out great.Excellant job on the vocals Trisha.
 

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Tricia41 on August 09, 2010, 12:43:48 AM

Thanks so much for the nice comments!  :) :)

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Donna on August 09, 2010, 07:33:49 AM

Yep, very nice tune.   
Re simplicity: Sometimes less is more. This is one of those times.  ;)

Good job all round. ;)

Donna

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Mr. Mom on August 09, 2010, 07:43:56 AM

As Holger said, very nice "Fleetwood Mac" sound. 8)
A little Lyndsay Buckingham harmonies and you guys are ready to go on tour. ;D

Take it from the "simplest" person here at MCS - simple is simply superb!

Great work Vinnie, Tricia, and Chuck!  :) :) 8) 8)

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: Tricia41 on August 16, 2010, 08:48:05 AM

Thanks so much, friends.  :)

Title: Re: My Heart Was In Pieces
Post by: snowdoguk on August 16, 2010, 09:03:54 AM

Really like this song, gets you tapping along from the opening few bars... well done all of you

Mike