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I Imagine He Cried (Christmas Song - Country Ballad)

 

Offline Appleluza

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This is a song I wrote a decade ago and worked up as a folk arrangement.  I always wanted to hear what it would sound like as a country song, so I collaborated with some friends in Nashville.  LindyM came to my aid, as he has often in the past, with just the right piano part and a nice pad. Davidinoz, from Nashville down-under, was kind enough to play bass on this and also do all the mixing.  I think I drove him totally crazy with all the mixing changes and so I APOLOGIZE, David.  I guess it's the obsessive-compulsive gene in my personality that manifests itself when it comes to trying to make an imperfect song and recording and perfect production.  It turned out great in the end.  Thanks guys!

This is a song about the first Christmas from the viewpoint of Joseph.  Being a Dad and a step-dad myself, I always had a soft spot for Joseph in the story - maybe his wasn't the minor role we usually assign to him in the drama.

I Imagine He Cried

Credits:
Words and music: Rob Talbert
Vocals: Race Godson and Jessica Ford (Nashville)
Piano and Pad: Lindy (LindyM)
Bass: David Timmins (Australia)
Acoustic Guitar: Rob Talbert (Appleluza)
Pedal Steel Guitar:
Drums and tracking: Michael Puwal (Nashville)
Mixing: David Timmins (Davidinoz)

Lyrics

Verse 1
I imagine he cried when she told him the news;
A baby was coming but it was not his.
As he shouldered the burden no husband would chose,
Were the words he spoke gentle and mild?
Joseph loved Mary and Jesus her child.

Verse 2
I imagine she cried at her moment of joy;
Tears spent in happiness, tears spent in pain.
Did she answer at all when he said, "It's a boy"?
Did his hand touch her cheek, did she smile?
Joseph loved Mary and Jesus her child.

Chorus 1
Joseph was a strong man, some thought him a wronged man;
He gave his heart to a woman he loved.
He was her shelter, he kept her, he held her;
That was the kind of a man that he was.

Verse 3
I imagine he cried just a little that night,
Waking in hunger, as new babies do.
Did he fall back to sleep 'till the new morning light
In the arms of a man rocked a while?
Joseph loved Mary and Jesus her child.

Chorus 2
Joseph was a strong man, some thought him a wronged man;
He gave his heart to a woman he loved.
He was her shelter, he kept her, he held her;
That was the kind of a man that he was.

Verse 4
I imagine he cried when they told him the news;
Jesus was taken by soldiers that night.
As he shouldered a burden no father would chose,
Were the words he spoke raging and wild?
Joseph loved Mary and Jesus her child.

Ending
I imagine he cried when they told him the news.

« Last Edit: November 21, 2008, 03:39:06 AM by Appleluza »
Rob Talbert, Songwriter and Producer for Appleluza, a virtual multi-genre band.


Offline CosmicDolphin

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Good song, and finished in time for Christmas !  Nice to hear the story from a different viewpoint - good idea.

Nice mix Davidinoz and well played / sang by everyone

You have quite a collection now Rob !  When's the album out  ?

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You have quite a collection now Rob !  When's the album out  ?

I've been pondering this same question myself, CD.  I don't think these songs fit together very well, for one thing, and they don't all "speak" with the same voice, like most albums do, coming from one artist.  If I did an album with 10 or 12 of my songs, it would be more akin to a demo reel or compilation.  I guess there have been pleanty of compilations done, and NickT did the MC compilation a few years ago.  I dunno... do you think something like that would work?

What would be involved in mastering them all to have the same levels and sonic signature?

Rob
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Offline CosmicDolphin

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You have quite a collection now Rob !  When's the album out  ?

What would be involved in mastering them all to have the same levels and sonic signature?

Rob

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Offline NickT

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I really liked this the first time I heard it a while ago! Love the turn coming out of the verse.

Very nice everyone.

Beautiful.

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Offline stoman

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Perfect!

Folks, do more country and folk songs here! :)

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Offline Donna

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Absolutely lovely.  :)  Quite moving.

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