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Title: Lost in the Desert
Post by: Tricia41 on July 07, 2009, 02:27:06 PM

]Vincent    (Writer,Composer,Guitar,Vocals,vocal melody,Lyrics,Mix)
Tricia       (Vocals,Lyrics,Vocal Melody)
Jwoo        (Drums)
Combobob (Bass)

Lost in the Desert

Lost in the desert
no shoes on your feet
don't no where your going
lord knows what you'll meet

Lost in the desert
don't know where your going
Sun is scorching (and the)
Wind is blowing

Sand in our eyes
No surprise
up ahead
theres just blue skies


no surprise
up ahead
blue skies


here in the desert
see no sign of relief
so tired, so alone
a desolate place to be

Lost in the desert
 where are we going
our skin is burning (and our)
fear is showing

it shows in our eyes
no where to hide
longing for
the blue skies

nowhere to hide
longing for
blue skies/color]

Title: Re: Lost in the Desert
Post by: cyclone on July 07, 2009, 04:11:13 PM

F is for fantastic
listened several times liked it every time.
loved the last note on the acoustic lead at the beginning.

                         cyclone

Title: Re: Lost in the Desert
Post by: CosmicDolphin on July 09, 2009, 02:46:48 AM

Nice mood on this one...I can almost feel the desert.  Someone's guitar sounds a little outta tune to me , might wanna check it out.

CD

Title: Re: Lost in the Desert
Post by: Vincent on July 09, 2009, 03:36:22 AM

Is it the lead guitar that sounds out CD...just wondering.

I may have to redo that lead if it sounds out...I actually used a pitch shifter on that track to avoid retuning my guitar to the song because its not in 440 tuning... 8)

Title: Re: Lost in the Desert
Post by: CosmicDolphin on July 09, 2009, 03:44:53 AM

Quote from: Vincent on July 09, 2009, 03:36:22 AM

Is it the lead guitar that sounds out CD...just wondering.

I may have to redo that lead if it sounds out...I actually used a pitch shifter on that track to avoid retuning my guitar to the song because its not in 440 tuning... 8)

I'm not sure , I thought it was the acoustic at first ...maybe they are just not in tune with each other.  If you ran it through melodyne you should be able to see, but if the acoustic is off that's a major PITA.

CD

Title: Re: Lost in the Desert
Post by: Vincent on July 09, 2009, 04:03:19 AM

Perhaps i should run the 3 guitar tracks through melodyne and pitch correct them...i guess that might work...wouldnt hurt to do the same with my backup vocals as well.

Title: Re: Lost in the Desert
Post by: CosmicDolphin on July 09, 2009, 12:49:37 PM

Quote from: Vincent on July 09, 2009, 04:03:19 AM

Perhaps i should run the 3 guitar tracks through melodyne and pitch correct them...i guess that might work...wouldnt hurt to do the same with my backup vocals as well.

 ;D  Yep ..par for the course with my singing  ;D