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Who Can Cheer A Clown

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Offline stoman

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Unfortunately Mike has disappeared from this site a long time ago - and John has never been a member at all. But I still consider this collaboration an MCS collaboration, at least in parts.

This song has been on my list of unfinished songs for years because I could not find a drummer for it. So I finally decided to take matters in my own hands to get it off the list.

Here is the result. I hope some of you will like it.

Lyrics: Mike Graszyk
Vocals: John Newman
Composed, arranged & mixed by Steffen Offermann

WHO CAN CHEER A CLOWN?

This is the ring where I learned to dance
And dream of romance
Here are the stands where the patrons go
Loving my show

But I'd like to whisper to a child
That there's no ounce of meaning in this smile
It's a worthless painted mask
So people never choose to ask what's wrong

But now I must laugh on
You can't tell I'm crying
As my soul is dying
And when the songs fade out
No one seems to wonder
Who can cheer a clown?

These are my friends, we all look alike
Under the lights
Here is our car, we all fit inside
For one lonely ride

But I'd love to leave this giant tent
Pound my heels along the cracked cement
Fly away without a trace
Wash off the makeup on my face tonight

I don't wish to juggle swords
Loud applause is no reward
For the man who's sadder than he first appears
Now the lion tamer's tired
Acrobats fall off the wire
All the circus magic slowly disappears

Regards,
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Awesome job Steffan - I love it! 
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I hate clowns!

I remember going to a circus years ago on Clapham Common (South West London) and a clown was attacked by an elephant during the performance. That got the biggest laugh of the night (from me at least) Don't worry, the elephant wasn't harmed.  :D

A strange song, Steffen. There's a kind of weirdness to it that I quite like. The drum rolls do add that circus vibe and sound authentic enough. It's certainly different from the usual songs we tend to hear at MSC which is encouraging. Keep them coming!

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Thanks, Bill and Billy! :)

Everybody seems to hate clowns. I wonder how they can make a living. ;)

I have always seen clowns as a symbol for melancholy or solitude. Or, sometimes, also as a symbol of evil. Depends on the clown. :)

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Great stuff Steffen, if I could chime in on the clown conversation... for some reason, clowns always remind me of Stoney! :D ;D

After a second listen, this reminds me of a cross between David Bowie and one of Meatloaf's "Rocky Horror" songs. 8) 8)
« Last Edit: May 05, 2011, 08:25:44 AM by Mr. Mom »
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Yeah there's somethiing a bit creepy and off kilter about the song ..just like Clowns...How did you do that ?

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I hate clowns!

I remember going to a circus years ago on Clapham Common (South West London) and a clown was attacked by an elephant during the performance. That got the biggest laugh of the night (from me at least) Don't worry, the elephant wasn't harmed.  :D


So when the elephant took a bite out of the clown did he spit it out and say, "Hey, that tasted a bit funny" ... ?

Nice job Steffen, I really enjoyed that. A little strange and unusual :)

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