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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: toadman on May 04, 2012, 12:25:39 AM

Title: Stay
Post by: toadman on May 04, 2012, 12:25:39 AM

I'd like to thank the following people for their contributions to this song;

toddtown05 - Vocals & great ad libs!
Catfish - Keyboards
Fretlessian (Kompoz) - Bass
Breathtax (Kompoz) - Guitar

Stay - Words and music (c) toadman 2011

The wheel turns around, never slowing down, it just leaves a stain
And the fight never stops, it drives 'till you drop, no games left to play
Some people live by platitudes and their attitude just leaves them grey
'Coz time is a fact, there's no turning back, time is a fact, there's no turning back
And the longer you stay away, the harder it seems to say

Stay with me
Please stay it's so right
Stay with me
Please stay until it's light       

When love burns down, it burns to the ground and turns to a sea of hate
There's no place for passion trying to refashion the heat that once sustained
And every word is broken, lies left unspoken
'Coz time is slippin' away, it's gettin harder for me to say

Title: Re: Stay
Post by: cyclone on May 04, 2012, 10:25:50 AM

Great song Mick nice job on the guitars vocals ain`t to shabby either.Nice touch on the keys at the end.
Cyclone

Title: Re: Stay
Post by: Benny on May 04, 2012, 10:56:50 PM

This is a good catchy rock number. The opening riff had me hooked from the start. I like it! 8)

Title: Re: Stay
Post by: Studioplayer on May 05, 2012, 08:57:15 PM

Good tune Mick. Guitars sound great. It's all a bit heavy on the reverb for my taste but sounds pretty good. Nice job  8)

Dave

Title: Re: Stay
Post by: toadman on May 06, 2012, 06:05:58 AM

Thanks guys.
If I hadn't deleted all the original tracks except for a stereo mixdown :'( I may have
been able to add some more gonads to the sound.
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Title: Re: Stay
Post by: docmidnite on May 09, 2012, 02:05:26 AM

Right out of the 80s!
I hear John Parr  ;D
Great hook and a great voice!

Sorry to hear you "lost" the original tracks, Mick! :(

Title: Re: Stay
Post by: toadman on May 10, 2012, 07:23:02 PM

Thanks Doc, I enjoyed working on it and I learned a valuable lesson about deleting stuff.
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