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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Sharpola on February 12, 2007, 11:45:15 PM

Title: Sunday - Sharpola / MM / Noel
Post by: Sharpola on February 12, 2007, 11:45:15 PM

Here's an oddball tune that finally came together with help with lyrics from MM & Noel

Enjoy!

I catch the rays
Trace the breeze
Smell the ocean over me
With sand sifting slow
Through my toes

I paint the sky
The birds I see
Flying circles gracefully
But how will I know
Where they go

The sun is setting soon
My sun is setting soon
But oh you worry, not today
'cause its Sunday

A stroke of blue
Edged in white
Ebbing beauty from the light
Orange red maroon

I brush the dunes
From my eyes
A farewell tear I will cry
But somehow they know
I must go

No more looking back
We walk the beach
Feel the water
Lap our feet
And it's cool
How the blue sky makes us feel alive
Cause it's Sunday

Title: Re: Sunday
Post by: NickT on February 13, 2007, 12:10:31 AM

Ray -

That is awesome!

I still say you need to let me borrrow that muse of yours!

Nice piece of art.

Nick

Title: Re: Sunday
Post by: Studioplayer on February 13, 2007, 02:41:19 PM

REALLY nice song Ray. Kind of reminds me of Supertramp, with a touch of Beatles and a lot of you. Some cool changes. Most of the songs around here I'll just open up to listen but when I see one of yours I automatically save knowing I'm going to dig it. Geez. I think I have close to an albums worth of your tunes now. Anyways another nice tune bro.  8)

Dave

Title: Re: Sunday
Post by: MM on February 13, 2007, 05:36:53 PM

Ray,

I think it sounds awesome...  And I'm glad I could jump into one where you needed a hand...  You dug out a few of my lyrics from the CC abyss a year ago and have continued to pick them up along the way (as well as many other lyricists work)...  Much appreciated...

I'm not a big Beatles fan, but the "orange red maroon" screamed Beatles to me when I wrote it...  and your delivery proved it...

I hope in the end it was what you were looking to convey in the song... life's a beach, but it must go on...

Cheers,

Mike

Title: Re: Sunday - Sharpola / MM / Noel
Post by: NickT on July 09, 2008, 09:36:07 PM

Ray,

Just listened again. I forgot about this song.

This is just freakin' great.

Mike and noel - lyrics are very trippy.

This is just a joy to listen to.

Nick

Title: Re: Sunday - Sharpola / MM / Noel
Post by: Sharpola on July 10, 2008, 12:47:26 AM

Thanks Nick!   :)

Title: Re: Sunday - Sharpola / MM / Noel
Post by: Thunder on July 13, 2008, 01:10:15 AM

Hey Ray be fun to play with this 2,ps ur bro Todd :)

Title: Re: Sunday - Sharpola / MM / Noel
Post by: canuk62 on July 15, 2008, 09:34:01 PM

Have to agree with Nick..a real joy to listen to Ray, congrats! :)
Marc