Musicians Collaboration Studio
Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Tricia41 on November 12, 2012, 06:46:28 PM
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This was an old lyric I helped JImmy Freed to build a song out of. I sent him a copy, and he wanted me to thank you guys. He loves it. :)
Thanks so much Mickbrit , Glummi, and Jwoo10, for making it sound so awesome. 8) 8) ^-^
Jimmy Freed- Lyrics
Tricia Dovidio- Lyrics, chord structure, melody
Guitars, mix, arrangement- Mike Lovering
Bass- Andreas Glummert
Drums- John Wooten
One Bad Dream
by jfreed18 and Tricia Dovidio
verse 1:
A D
she's been in the shower
G A
for over an hour
A D
she's wondering how
G A
she even got there
Her sleep disorder
Is taking over
It's out of control
a condition so rare
verse 2:
the ever present pain
she can't explain
suffers in silence
living in fear
any given moment
her free will stolen
her silent screams
no one will hear
[Chorus]
E D C G
always tired, living in a fog
E D E
trapped in a nightmare's scene
C
poor girl,
D A
Her life is one bad dream
verse3:
can't be left alone
history has shown
there are no remedies
or cure
anxiety grows
as the moonlight shows
and it's too much
to endure
bridge:
C
She is a member
G D E
Of a sleepless society
C G
with every spell
D EEE
She's losing her sanity
[Chorus]
always tired , living in a fog
trapped in a nightmare's scene
poor girl,
Her life is one bad dream
One bad dream
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Tell Jimmy he is more than welcome. It was a fun collab and turned out great. Nice to see John back on the drums too. :)
Mick.
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Yes! John always knows just what a song needs for drums. 8) 8)
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Sounds like a Runaways kinda tune.
Nice job gang!
NickT
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Nicely done
Cyclone
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Thanks for checking it out! :) :)
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Nice one gang. Solid.
I would recognize those classic Mickbrit guitar note bends anywhere :)
Andy
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My Band, Diamond Edge played this one at an Old Home Day in my tow. We had hula hoop girls out front!
My daughter (on the Left) and her friend were a hit!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6tGNwl6nsQ
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Great job...really enjoyed the vocals :)
Smithie
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Thank you!!!
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Hey, good live version...and those girls rock at Hula