Musicians Collaboration Studio
Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: McLovin on July 30, 2015, 04:05:58 PM
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Hey Ya'll.
Here's a new one from me with some help from Lino performing some stellar guitars. Enjoy! :)
Lost And Found
Music and Words:Jay Lamothe
Guitars:Lino Gonzalez
V1: Lucid these dreams, or though so it seems
I wake to find it's not there, what ends to the means
Forsake a new day, and go on my way, where will it lead?
V2: And then you appear, and lull does the fear
Of what I've lost won't be found, mislaid souvenir
Break a new day, accept it's ok, to love once more I say
CH1: You are not what I deserve, but I'll live and I'll learn
I can't find the reasons or words to explain
But care for you is what I'll claim,
What's lost has been found once again
V3: The smell of your skin, is where it begins
Euphoria does announce itself from within
Embrace this new day, A place I will stay, and love once more I say
CH2: You are not what I deserve, but I'll live and I'll learn
I can't find the reasons or words to explain
But care for you is what I'll claim,
What's lost has been found once again
CH3: You are not what I deserve, but I'll live and I'll learn
I can't find the reasons or words to explain
But care for you is what I'll claim, carefully I will reclaim
What's lost has been found once again
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What an interesting structure, Jay, with the semi-abstract, Olde Worlde way of expressing the thoughts. (At least that's how they feel to me. ;) ) In any case, it's effective. The music & melody are wonderful of course, with stunning guitar. Good job, both of you. :)
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Great to hear new stuff from you!
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Nice pop song
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This one I would love to hear over and over again.....
Great work Jay and Lino :)
Smithie
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Thanks all for the kind comments.. and I love your description of the lyric structure Donna. Didn't really think about when I wrote it but you are spot on.
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J:
Nice structure and really intense (to me), made me want to see where it was going. Enjoyed it.
Paul
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Very nice Jay.
Takes you on a bit of a journey , the guitar parts fit perfectly with the mood of the song.
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Great stuff bro! Sounds killer as usual! 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)