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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Mimmo on August 16, 2014, 03:22:21 PM

Title: DREAMS
Post by: Mimmo on August 16, 2014, 03:22:21 PM: Thank to Dan'l and Jardim...And all of you for listening

Lyrics : Dan'l B Young (off-site)
Guitars: Jardim Asli
Music
Mix/Master
and vocals: Domenic Mercurio

   Dreams
Life is a song of sensitivity imagination and creativity.
Ever to belong within any love song.
With dreams in the make'n so incredibly.
Enjoying special moments ever so breath take'n.
   Dreams have a way of coming true while open arms await for you.
A desire we wish to awaken with dreams in the make'n.
Enjoying special moments ever so breath take'n.
Sincerity and commitment with dreams in the make'n.
   So come on along, life is a song.
Love and romance carries on endlessly.
Dreams never felt wrong, with you coming along.
with out any hearts break'n senselessly.
   You enter my dreams before I ever do.
And I hear your voice but can't see you.
Soon to discover we will find one another,
dreams in the make'n come true.
While open arms await for you
dreams in the make'n come true.
Title: Re: DREAMS
Post by: stoman on August 17, 2014, 10:35:24 AM: Nice old-fashioned composition, Mimmo. Maybe some more movement on the bass track?

The guitar solo is too short! I want to hear more of it. :)

Regards
Steffen
Title: Re: DREAMS
Post by: Mimmo on August 17, 2014, 01:10:45 PM: Thanks Steffen...Unfortunately the bass track was one that came with the BIAB creation I tried a few other ones but couldn't find anything better. You're right the solo is a bit short , but fits in nicely.

Thanks for listening
Mimmo
Title: Re: DREAMS
Post by: billybrock on August 19, 2014, 04:56:39 AM: Good Vocal Mimmo. Excellent tone, and phrasing.

Billy W.
Title: Re: DREAMS
Post by: CosmicDolphin on August 30, 2014, 03:51:49 AM: Nice vocals Mimmo

I like the song, maybe could use a little more swing as the backing feels a bit stiff.

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