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Kindness I Mainly Recall (Donna/Nadia/Gemma/Billy) Yippee! Finalist in comp. (-:

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Now for something a little different.  ;)

Music/Melody/Piano: Nadia Cripps  (off-site collab)
Vocals: Gemma Louise Edwards    (off-site collab)
Cello: Billy Playle
Lyrics: Donna Devine

Some of you might recall bits of the lyric from several months ago.
Last month I re-wrote the original and took it in a different direction.
I hope you enjoy it. Especially our Billy's bit.  ;)

Donna


Kindness I Mainly Recall

(v1)
Sleepless, I gaze through the window
At roses growing close to the wall
Dew from the long night is forming
I know many petals will fall

Chorus
Grey is the colour of my true love's hair
His eyes are faded blue
The hands that I love, once hard and strong
Look bruised where the veins show through
Where did it go? When did it go?
We seemed not to notice at all
With the passing of years, the joy and the tears
It's kindness I mainly recall

(v2)
We paid with youth for our wisdom
Yet the thought makes me smile late at night
For I know though these hours move slowly
In my heart, love's embers burn bright

Bridge
He's dreaming softly beside me
Once the lover who hid in my garden
Then came to my arms when the moon rose
And our bodies needed no pardon

Chorus
Grey is the colour of my true love's hair
His eyes are faded blue
The hands that I love, once hard and strong
Look bruised where the veins show through
Where did it go? When did it go?
We seemed not to notice at all
With the passing of years, the joy and the tears
It's kindness I mainly recall


« Last Edit: September 10, 2009, 05:36:21 AM by Donna »
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Donna,

The voice and the musical arrangement (piano and cello) suit the lyric perfectly.

A compelling listen - great work everyone involved!

Cheers
Andy



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I think Nadia's piano playing and voicings are beautiful.....I really mean that.

The lyric's are very touching but not in a saccharin way and such insight and attention to detail and so well performed by Gemma.

I love this song.

Billy.



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Fantastic stuff Donna

This would be perfect in a big west end musical stage production ... magic

Ian

I agree...

I thought it was a cover of something I already heard at first  ;D

Classy stuff !

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Paul, Andy, Ian, Billy, and CD...Thanks so much. I love how Nadia and Gemma performed this. I'll pass your kind comments on to them.  :)

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Thanks, Dave.  ;)  Yes, it sure would be nice to hear it on a movie track.  :D

I'm tickled pink at the moment, though. The song has just been named a Finalist in the UK International Songwriting Competition.  :)

OK, it's not Winner or even Runner-up. But Finalist isn't bad for my first-ever comp.  ;)
Who knows, maybe next year...  ;)

Donna
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Congratulations Donna!! I saw that Into the Light was a semi finalist so all in all quite a good result.. Kudos to all the contributors of this song... Well done

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Yes - well done Donna - you should be tickled pink (now thats a song lyric title for you).

Glad to see your collabs/lyrics/music is doing well, all the best for "Kindness"!

Thoroughly deserved I would say.

Keep rocking!
Cheers
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Mike and Andy, thank you.  :)

Yes, Into the Light did well too. Semi-finalist is nothing to sneeze at.    ;)  (Means it was in the top 23rd % out of the 6000+ songs submitted to the comp.)  A couple more of my collabs from here were also semi-finalists.

Donna
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