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Title: Brand New Day
Post by: Tricia41 on January 01, 2012, 08:16:38 AM
Brand new song for a brand new year!
 :) :)

Thanks guys for doing great work and for letting me sing!



Tricia    (Vocals,Lyrics,Vocal Melody)
Cyclone (Composer,Writer,Guitar)
PVD      (Lyrics)
Vincent (Writer,Composer,Bass,Lyrics,Vocal Melody,Producer,mixer)

A Brand New Day

(v1)
You wake up in the morning
You're looking in the mirror
Tomorrow is a brand new day
The air is warm and breezy
The leaves are moving freely
birds get up and then they fly away

(v2)
You're driving down the freeway
You're looking at the ocean
Watching all the cars go by
You take it nice and easy
Put on your favorite Dj
Helping you along the way

(chorus)
And now
You're finally seeing what's there
Not just passing it by
You've lost those blues
You're giving life a try
Oh, and by the way
Ain't it wonderful
The start of a brand new day
(v3)
You see the mountains standing
Off on the horizon
Swearing that they just appeared
The shadows from the soft clouds
Dance across the road and streets now
Like your blues, they'll disappear


Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Vincent on January 01, 2012, 08:28:26 AM

Thanks for posting Tricia.

Chorus vocals sound great on this.

Programmed drums are a bit boring on this and my backup tracks are hissy...Other than that it sounds cool.

favorite part of mine on this is the flute riff after birds get up and fly away part.
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: PVD on January 01, 2012, 08:44:02 AM
Everyone:

Good job, well done, thanks for letting me get involved in this one.  It is a very catchy tune.

Paul
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Vincent on January 01, 2012, 08:54:37 AM

Nice job with the lyrics Paul...good stuff.

Thanks
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: cyclone on January 04, 2012, 12:19:23 PM
Turned out great.Well done Vincent,Paul, and Tricia.Thanks for letting me be a part.
Cyclone
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Vincent on January 04, 2012, 12:59:11 PM

I fixed/removed hiss from my backup vocals.

New files can be found here.

Right click and save

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/52522401/Brand%20New%20Day%20%28New%20Final%20Mixes%29.zip
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Studioplayer on January 04, 2012, 01:03:49 PM
Sweet tune. Suits Tricia really well. The vocals are bit buried though. Sounds like they could come forward in the mix a bit more. Nice little tune.  :)

Dave
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Paulo on January 07, 2012, 06:20:05 AM
Nice tune.
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Tricia41 on January 07, 2012, 06:25:40 AM
Thanks guys. :)
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Johnny on January 07, 2012, 06:45:37 AM

Great little tune ev'ryone!!!

Nice vocals again, Trish, you always deliver! ;)

Solid lyrics Paul with a lovely message...i always read the lyric, closely...

---a tiny nit for me---

i woke up, and i'm looking in the mirror...

Shouldn't that sing "Today" is a brand new day ::) :D

No big deal, but it stuck out to me...but then, "who reads the lyrics" ;D

It's a real, "feel good tune"

Delightful to the ears! ;)

Cheers!  8)
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Tricia41 on January 07, 2012, 07:29:58 AM
You are right, Johnny, I first sung it "today", but Vince liked the 3 syllables of tomorrow. :)Thanks!
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Johnny on January 07, 2012, 08:17:46 AM
STOPPPP!!!!!

Hold the bus dear friends!!!! >:(  :o :o :o

i had to re-listen,

This stands out too odd.....strange.....funny even  :o :o :o

To anyone seriously listening to this song, and i say this with only love i my heart  ;)

i pray i'm (not) sounding arrogant!  :-[

The lyric's Gotta sing "Today" ??? :o

In my humble opinion, TIFWIW....

cheers :-\

Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Tricia41 on January 07, 2012, 09:33:51 AM
Haha! I just do as I'm told. I didn't write this one. :)
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Johnny on January 07, 2012, 09:40:18 AM
;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Vincent on January 07, 2012, 11:25:02 AM

 8)

Thanks for listening.

Yeah I liked the 3 syllables of tomorrow instead of today...even though the lyric makes more sense with the word today...The word tomorrow still works though because after all tomorrow is a brand new day.



Title: Re: Brand New Day
Post by: Johnny on January 07, 2012, 11:37:32 AM
Okie Doke :)

jus' tryin' ta help! ;D