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Killer

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This song is supposed to be self explanatory. I hope it translates.

Killer - words & music - toadman (c) 2011

Captain Fantastic - vocals
Mr Mom - lyric adds, moral support
toadman - guits, bass, keys, drum machine.

V1. I feel pressure at the back of my skull, I feel the need once more
      Pick up the keys and turn off the TV, float out the door
      My whole life is an open wound, just a running sore
      Hop in the car and breathe in easy, just like before

V2. I was born with no remorse, I know the Mark of Cain
      And I have The Finger of God on my forehead, inflicting pain
      When I dream it always seems blood pours like rain
      Sit in the car and breathe in easy, here we go again
« Last Edit: August 16, 2011, 06:18:45 AM by toadman »



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Sorry Tricia,
Still getting used to what the go is.
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Thanks Tricia.
I think the Captain gave Joey (RIP) a run for his money there.
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This is cool I could hear this on the radio from an encharted desert isle. :)
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Sounds great Mick! I think you missed giving yourself credit in the above post for your lyrics... my contribution was just a minor suggestion, all the words Ralph sang are yours - and very good by the way.

You singing on this was perfect Ralph, then it just got better with whatever Mick did in the mix. :) 8)
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Thanks, buddy. I fixed it.
Never let a chance to claim credit slip by, I say.
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Nice rocker!! I like the building intro. Cool stuff guys!  8)

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Sounds really cool guys.  :) Nice vocals, Ralph!

Thanks Tricia,I just had a stab at,luckily it was only a few lines.


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Sounds great Mick! I think you missed giving yourself credit in the above post for your lyrics... my contribution was just a minor suggestion, all the words Ralph sang are yours - and very good by the way.

You singing on this was perfect Ralph, then it just got better with whatever Mick did in the mix. :) 8)
Thanks John,you know how I feel about singing,I do it through gritted teeth !


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Love this rocker! Great intro and outro ... middle sounds a tad muddy though. Good job guys!

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Nice intro  :)

I like the vocal delivery, and interesting FX

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