Love Suicide - Sharpola / Dove4Simon

[Sharpola]

Music - Ray Sharp
Lyrics - Lisa S Bennett

Love Suicide

I'm exhausted by your drama
Worn out from silly games
Put down by your insults
Cut up by your pain

I just keep waiting
To see if things will change
But the more I wish it
The more they stay the same

I can't walk away
Even though I've tried
I just stand and take it
Love suicide

People tell me to give up
That you're just no good
I don't listen to what they're saying
Even though I should

I know you want to change
Sometimes I see it in your eyes
But when you catch me looking
You put up your disguise

You don't want to be the one hurt
Or the one to cry
So to save yourself
You sacrifice the guy

[NickT]

Very Cool! 

Cool lyrics.

Nice to hear you rock one out Ray.

Great riff rock tune.

Nick

[Dove4Simon]

Thanks Nick! 

[Jman]

What can I say Ray?
YOU ROCK MAN!
Lisa .... Your lyrics are DEEP   J

[Sharpola]

Thanks guys!

Ray

[The Cracks]

Nice song.  Good work.

[luisma1972]

Great Ray, nicely done!

[youtube]

COOL WORK GENESIS

I had posted a reply here from the "Tubes" acount.  Deleted that account.    and returned to my original account. 

I had made some comments here and, I wish to restate them for the record. Ray as I said prior to Jmans post above. The work on this one is awesome. There should have been 3000 views instead of the lower number that existed when I made my original comments. Maybe it's because of the lyrical content. I don't really know for sure. But what I do know for sure is the production is "Top Notch". The guitar riffs and solo are simply outstanding and a 10/10. The vocals are fantastic and as Nick said before in another response to one of your finished songs.. "You are a sort of genesis". If I said "It takes one to know one", some may thing that is someone being smug or arrogant...  so... DA DA DA DA.....

Sometimes I feel that I am rubbing someone's ego to much but NOT 
I admire good work and it's important to support others too. 
 
Hats off... 

Tubes 

[Sharpola]

Thanks Joshua!!

Sorry couldn't resist 

Ray

COOL WORK GENESIS

I had posted a reply here from the "Tubes" acount.  Deleted that account.    and returned to my original account. 

I had made some comments here and, I wish to restate them for the record. Ray as I said prior to Jmans post above. The work on this one is awesome. There should have been 3000 views instead of the lower number that existed when I made my original comments. Maybe it's because of the lyrical content. I don't really know for sure. But what I do know for sure is the production is "Top Notch". The guitar riffs and solo are simply outstanding and a 10/10. The vocals are fantastic and as Nick said before in another response to one of your finished songs.. "You are a sort of genesis". If I said "It takes one to know one", some may thing that is someone being smug or arrogant...  so... DA DA DA DA.....

Sometimes I feel that I am rubbing someone's ego to much but NOT 
I admire good work and it's important to support others too. 
 
Hats off... 

Tubes