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Offline Sharpola

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Music - Ray Sharp
Lyrics - Z. Mulls

PUNCH MY TICKET
Lyrics Copyright 2005 by Z. Mulls

(v1)
Don't know why I didn't learn my lesson
The first or second or third time around
You draw me back, with passion and aggression
Only to hear
That old familiar sound
Of frustration
Harsh accusation
Making me unsure
Well, punch my ticket
And I'll be out the door


(v2)


(chorus)
Punch my ticket
You're not what I dreamed
Punch my ticket one more time
Maybe this time I'll get redeemed


(musical interlude)

(bridge)
I'll come back you'll punch it again
When I've paid your fee
What do I get when I get to ten
Do you break my heart for free?


 
(v3)
Why do I insist on returning
After being blamed and abused
When I think I'm finally learning
You snap your fingers
Making me confused
And conflicted
Highly addicted
Hoping for a cure
Well, punch my ticket
(It's) what I'm back here for


(chorus)
Punch my ticket
You're not what I dreamed
Punch my ticket one more time
Maybe this time I'll get redeemed


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Ray is on a roll.....

Great lyrics + Great music = Great song...

Awesome guys...

Mike


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I think this one is really outstanding. Congrats!
Luis Manuel Aguilar


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Nice one guys. I enjoyed this. Great tone!

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What HARD ROCK   >:D

My ears hurt!  >:D  ;D

I like the lyrics. Well written.

I always like to comment on the production. Very tight as always Ray. Nice job!  8)

I like the drums. They are clear and crisp. and those toms sound like Toms the way they should.
The rhythm gtr's are on the money. The vocals are a little barred in the mix. Have not heard it on a good stereo live so it's hard to judge 100%. The solo is cool. Great but maybe a little predictable.

Sound like a Nick T production in a way. Love that ending feel. and heard some sort of cool talking part in there. Smooth.

DAM YOUR GOOD.

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