Here is what I think of this mix.
Somehow I can hear what it should be but there is too much noise in the mix. Hiss. Kelly's vocals are well done and the harmonies are very beautiful. Sounds like the mix is sort of slowing down sometimes. Not sure why. May be a plug in thing. The drums are done well but they are kind of too far back. Not sure about the bass. Just needs some processing and a pro mix. I think the drums are played well and everything else. Some effects and eq'ng on certain parts may help. Overall you have a nice tune that came out of the colab. Just a little dry but the string can be better improved. With a more pro mix Job this can really shine.
Sorry if there was anything negative.
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