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The Sweetest Apple

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Vincent

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Vincent        (Composer,Writer,Acoustic Guitar,Backup Vocals,Mix)
Tricia           (Composer,Writer,Vocals,Lyrics,Vocal Melody)
mickbrit55     (Electric Guitar)
GuitarGeorge (Bass)
Jman            (Drums)

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The Sweetest Apple

Tricia Dovidio (c) 2010

a warm wind blowing on a sunny day
the perfect time to play
flowers growing and the birds do sing
we're soaking up everything

now baby take my hand
lets walk this wondrous land
and if I decide to run
you be sure to chase me

if you lift me up real high
I know I'll reach the blue sky
I'll pick the sweetest apple too
I know just how to please you

and if we tire at last
we can lie down in the tall grass
if the warm breeze turns to cols
you'll have me to hold

a warm wind blowing on a sunny day
the perfect time to play
flowers growing and the birds do sing
we're soaking up everything
« Last Edit: May 25, 2010, 01:10:25 AM by Vincent »



Offline PVD

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Everyone:

Good listen, smooth feel.  Tric, I think your vocals could be more upfront, just my feel.

Paul


Vincent

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Thanks for the feedback PVD

I did some tweaking on the mix...sounds a bit better now

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Offline cyclone

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Love this song great job everyone.Sorry I couldn`t contribute anything.Had surgery a couple weeks ago just now trying to get out of the funk.

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Thank you much Tricia.

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I really love this song. Reminds me of Led Zeppelin and Fleetwood Mac. The good old times  :)
What a lovely  tune. great music, lyrics and vocals!
well done crew!



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I want to hear a follow-up to this song.  This sounds fantastic!


Offline CosmicDolphin

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Good stuff , has a retro vibe to it...like the backing vocals.

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ahhh the sweetest apple, the sweetest voice... very airy song and the acoustic guitar sounds great rounded off by some tasteful licks from Mick... bass and drums are tasteful (could have been a bit more up front in the mix for my taste)....

Well done everyone
Mike
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Vincent

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Thanks for the comments

Im probably going to remix this song again...It didnt turn out exactly how I wanted it to in regards to final mix.

Definately can sound better.



 

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