Musicians Collaboration Studio
Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: AndyG6508 on January 23, 2017, 11:02:52 PM
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Redid the bass guitar part...and took the opportunity of getting the "Wiz" Zax to replace the acoustic and rhythm guitar parts (poorly played by yours truly from last time around).
It was nice to listen to the guitar work from Riggo and vocals from Percy again.
Frank came up with another stunning mix armed with a shiny new limiter.
Cornelia (Gupta/McAndrew) (c) 2017
Verse1:
Oh Cornelia, can't you hear me callin'?
It's been a while and that's appallin'
Though you tried to hit me with your lorry
Please believe me when I say "I'm sorry"
Oh Make me happy and take me back again
Instrumental break
Verse2:
Oh Delia can you hear me pleadin’?
Screaming out your name until my lips start bleedin’
I know I've hurt you and caused you so much pain
So please forgive me, let's start again
Oh I'd love to have you back here with me
Chorus 1:
When together it's so much better
Oh Everything just falls back into place
Feels so good when we're together
Oh Everything falls back into place
There's something here you can't deny
We've got something going you and I
Can't you feel it yeah?
Guitar Solo
Verse3:
Ophelia can't you hear me choking?
Will you let me back in, see that I'm not joking?
Could you once more trust me and once again care?
Once again be happy with our love so rare?
You're the best thing that ever happened to me
Chorus 2:
When together it's so much better
Oh everything just falls back into place
Feels so good when we're together
Oh everything just falls back into place
There's something here you can't deny
We've got something going you and I
Repeat Verse1:
Oh Cornelia, can you hear me callin’?
It's been a while and that's appallin’
Though you tried to hit me with your lorry
Will you please believe me when I say "I'm sorry"?
Coda:
Yeah, make me happy and take me back again
See-saw Marjory Daw
I'd love to have you back here with me again
Oh Cornelia, Delia, Ophelia!!!!
Credits:
Steve "Percy" McAndrew: Vocals, lyrics
Jay Schankman : Piano
Roger Wilkerson: Electric guitars
Frank Zax: Acoustic & electric guitars, additional piano, Mix/master
Andy Gupta: Original music and lyrics, Bass
Erik Koskas: Drums
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This is sounding absolutely fab guys and I have just recorded a very short section of re-done vox for you 8) ;D
I have also redone the lyrics to follow the actual sung part Andy :
Verse1:
Oh Cornelia, can't you hear me callin'?
It's been a while and that's appallin'
Though you tried to hit me with your lorry
Please believe me when I say "I'm sorry"
Oh Make me happy and take me back again
Instrumental break
Verse2:
Oh Delia can you hear me pleadin’?
Screaming out your name until my lips start bleedin’
I know I've hurt you and caused you so much pain
So please forgive me, let's start again
Oh I'd love to have you back here with me
Chorus 1:
When together it's so much better
Oh Everything just falls back into place
Feels so good when we're together
Oh Everything falls back into place
There's something here you can't deny
We've got something going you and I
Can't you feel it yeah?
Guitar Solo
Verse3:
Ophelia can't you hear me choking?
Will you let me back in, see that I'm not joking?
Could you once more trust me and once again care?
Once again be happy with our love so rare?
You're the best thing that ever happened to me
Chorus 2:
When together it's so much better
Oh everything just falls back into place
Feels so good when we're together
Oh everything just falls back into place
There's something here you can't deny
We've got something going you and I
Repeat Verse1:
Oh Cornelia, can you hear me callin’?
It's been a while and that's appallin’
Though you tried to hit me with your lorry
Will you please believe me when I say "I'm sorry"?
Coda:
Yeah, make me happy and take me back again
See-saw Marjory Daw
I'd love to have you back here with me again
Oh Cornelia, Delia, Ophelia!!!!
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Hi Steve,
Glad you like the mix!!
I enjoyed that shout out to Peter Gabriel :). Maybe we should do a cover :).
I had forgotten about the changed lyrics, I shall replace the lyrics in the first post with your iteration.
Cheers,
Andy
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This is sounding absolutely fab guys and I have just recorded a very short section of re-done vox for you 8) ;D
Percy Gabriel? Is it really you? ;D
Great vocals as always, Steve!
Frank
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Thanks for the invitation to take part in this great tune, Andy!
And btw... your bass track for this was way cool and really well played!
In fact, all the tracks were a pleasure to work with. 8)
Frank
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At the end of the song "Gallows Pole" (1970) by Led Zeppelin, Robert Plant sings "See Saw Margery Daw" in reference to the swinging movement of a hanged body.
So does our Percy!
In some folklore, Margery Daw is a certain type of woman :).
Andy
This is sounding absolutely fab guys and I have just recorded a very short section of re-done vox for you 8) ;D
Percy Gabriel? Is it really you? ;D
Great vocals as always, Steve!
Frank
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HI Frank,
Always a pleasure to have you on board.
I am thrilled you liked the bass track, thank you.
Andy
Thanks for the invitation to take part in this great tune, Andy!
And btw... your bass track for this was way cool and really well played!
In fact, all the tracks were a pleasure to work with. 8)
Frank
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Cheers guys, it was a blast as always and here's to the next one 8) 8)
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Well done! Awesome mix!
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Well done! Awesome mix!
Thank you, Jay!
I'm lovin the new name. ;D
Frank
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Great stuff! Punk-ish rock! :)
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Great stuff! Punk-ish rock! :)
Thanks Steffen,
A lot of fun, this song was. :)
Frank
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Really enjoyed this.
Well done everyone!
NickT
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Hi Nick,
Appreciate the kind words!
Andy
Really enjoyed this.
Well done everyone!
NickT
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I love it! Lots of energy, vocals really reminds me of Robert Plant. Pleasuredome is the only man I know who can sing it this way. So so good!
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Great song guys....top performances from everyone :) :)
Smithie