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A Green Leaf In Its Hand (epic sci-fi prog-rock) Andy/Billy/John/David/Donna

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Clearly Andy had forgotten about the ancient Chinese curse "Be careful what you wish for" when he asked me 3-4 months ago to write a prog-rock 3-song cycle.  ;D
I hadn't a clue what I was going to write about, but after watching the 1972 cult sci-fi movie "Silent Running", I felt inspired. The lyrics in Parts 1 & 2A,B are based on the film's storyline, but with Part 3 I took pure poetic license. ;) Then Billy - who's plainly as mad as Andy and me - joined us in this mammoth production. :D And just when we were twiddling our thumbs, wondering what to do about percussion, John ambled by the thread and threw in some wonderful drumming. David deserves special mention as well. His vocals are superb.

Sit down, put your feet up, pour a favourite beverage, and join us on the long journey into deeeeeeep, deeeeeeep space... :)

Andy Gupta: music, guitars, organ, keyboards, bass
Billy Playle : music, acoustic and electric guitars, piano, keyboards, SFX, arrangements, mix/master
John Wooten: Drums
David Saylor: vocals
Nathan Knight: Narration (Part 2A)
Donna Devine: Lyrics & Narration (Part 1)


A Green Leaf In Its Hand

Part 1 ("Freeman Lowell")

Intro (NARRATED)
In the folly wrought by Progress
Earth's plant life had been destroyed
And to save what flora still remained
Orbiting greenhouses were deployed
Each managed by a four-man crew
Aided by robot drones
Aboard the eight huge freighters
That bore six domes where forests grew
Later to be returned to earth
And planted there anew

(v1)
Of the Valley Forge rangers
Freeman, Andy, Marty, John
Only Freeman loved his work
While the others dreamed of home
And though they often teased him
About his vegetables and flowers
He continued undeterred
Tending to the task at hand
Went on planting by the hour

(v2)
He'd dive into the deep blue lake
[And] swim there undisturbed
He was well known to the fauna
All the animals and birds
At night he'd play cards with his friends
Try to share [some of] his dreams
They'd simply laugh, said he was mad
[With] his head up in the clouds
Always going to extremes

Insert (NARRATED - robotic voice)
"Attention. Earth to Greenhouse Fleet.
You are ordered to abandon domes.
Jettison and destroy them with nuclear charges.
The freighters have been reassigned for commercial service.
You will return home"

Pre-chorus
To one, the news was tragic
The other three rejoiced
They raced to set the charges
Freeman had to make a choice

Chorus
Freeman Lowell was a loner
Had no family of his own
Loved the forests with a passion
Watched them closely till they'd grown
He'd spent eight years
In star-filled space
A stranger now to land
His only dream was that one day
A child might know the simple joy
Of holding a green leaf in its hand
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Part 2A ("Panic")

(v1)
Four domes already gone
Lowell is in a panic
In a struggle he kills John
His thinking now is manic
He traps the two in number 5
Then jettisons and bombs it
He's the only man alive
On a fateful course, can't stop it

(v2)
Huey, Dewey, and Louie
He names the service drones
Reprogrammes them to help him
Save the final forest dome
He redirects the Valley Forge
Escapes the freighter fleet
Takes a perilous route past Saturn
His rebellion is complete

Bridge 1 (NARRATED)
The freighter surfs down Saturn's rings
Through rainbow-tinted terrors
Careless Louie is swept away
Little room for errors
At last the craft emerges
Relatively unscathed
Lowell and two robots
Flee into deep space

Instrumental

(v3)
Huey and Dewey learn
To plant new trees, to cheat at cards
But then the trees begin to die
[And] this hits Lowell hard
In a mishap, Huey's damaged
And making matters worse
A rescue mission sister ship
Is soon about to berth

(v4)
Distraught he realises
What the forest needs is sun
He and Dewey set up lamps
Before the freighter comes
Knowing the crew will learn the truth
When it boards the rebel ship
Lowell quickly makes a plan
To give them all the slip

Bridge 2 (NARRATED)
He carefully instructs the drone
To tend to the forest's care
Before he jettisons the dome
To safety far from there
Then he detonates a nuclear charge
Destroying himself and Huey
And the freighter Valley Forge

Part 2B ("Reprise")

Pre-chorus
Not a man of violence
His heart had been torn in two
At night he'd grieved in silence
But he'd done what he had to do

Chorus
Freeman Lowell was a loner
Had no family of his own
Loved the forests with a passion
Watched them closely till they'd grown
He'd spent eight years
In star-filled space
A stranger now to land
His only dream was that one day
A child might know the simple joy
Of holding a green leaf in its hand
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Part 3 ("A Green Leaf In Its Hand")

(v1)
Light years hence, where life began
Past the rings of Saturn that only one man
Alone with his treasure had plummeted through
The Book of Creation is closing fast
The bone-tired Earth is breathing its last

(v2)
But far in the reaches of deep, deep space
Where the essence of lonely is given a face
The orphaned geodome still whirls
Like a giant net dotted with fireflies
With its precious cargo of Paradise

(v3)
The forest is lush and green and tall
It scarcely needs any care at all
And its keeper is old and corroded
Yet the faithful android perseveres
Its circuits hold a memory of tears

Bridge
Now in the lake where Lowell swam
A pale amoeba forming from
A brew of biosynthesis
Makes its way from the pristine depths
Where, still eyeless though well begun
It drags itself to the golden sand
Twisting toward a surrogate sun
At the feet of a rusted, benevolent god
Who holds a battered watering can

Pre-chorus
Some call Freeman evil
Others claim insane
He killed three men
For a forest
But he'd do it all again

Chorus
Lowell was a loner
Had no family of his own
Loved the forests with a passion
Watched them closely till they'd grown
He'd spent eight years
In star-filled space
A stranger now to land
His only dream was that one day
A child might know the simple joy
Of holding a green leaf in its hand

� 2010 Donna Devine
« Last Edit: September 20, 2013, 12:49:16 AM by Donna »
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Hi Valley Forgers,

We did it :).

It was a great collabing experience. Not often does one get the chance to do a suite of 3-4 songs related to a particular theme.

Donna your strong lyric was the bedrock which sparked the musical ideas. Billy was his usual brilliant self with his instrumental contributions, arrangements and the beautiful coda piece.

Super drumming from John and excellent vocals from David rounded off the project perfectly.

Thanks for inviting me onboard - its a privilege to be working with you two!

Andy
« Last Edit: January 02, 2011, 09:27:06 PM by AndyG6508 »


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You guy`s and gal are the bomb.When can we expect a video? :)
Totally awesome.

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Simply great work guys a prog master piece to be sure ...You have caught the atmosphere and essence of the story perfectly and it is nice to push the story forward to a resolution

Fantastic performances by all and cool to get Donna recorded as well

Perfect stuff

Ian  :) :) :)


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At the other site I said this is some of the finest epic prog rock I've heard in a while - and I repeat that! :)

That's the sort of music I would love to do myself in 2011 ... IF I could find any collaborators.  :-\

Anyway, great, great job everybody, and the mix is very good too!

And, Andy, you are a multi-talent! Guitars, bass, keys AND composition ... very impressive!

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Thanks Cyc ;) for the kind comment.

Re the video I'd let Donna answer that I think she was toying with the idea of a sildeshow....

Cheers
Andy
You guy`s and gal are the bomb.When can we expect a video? :)
Totally awesome.

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Thanks Stoney :)

Donna's story-telling was sublime!! and you are no slouch either :)

Andy

Simply great work guys a prog master piece to be sure ...You have caught the atmosphere and essence of the story perfectly and it is nice to push the story forward to a resolution

Fantastic performances by all and cool to get Donna recorded as well

Perfect stuff

Ian  :) :) :)


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Hey Steffen,

Thanks for the appreciative listen and the kind comment re my contributions. I chipped in wherever I could, the real guitar playing including the solos, and a lot of the piano/keys playing was by the MCS in-house genius, namely Mr Billy Playle. :)

Cheers
Andy

And, Andy, you are a multi-talent! Guitars, bass, keys AND composition ... very impressive!

Regards,
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« Last Edit: January 05, 2011, 01:24:59 PM by AndyG6508 »


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Donna/Guys this is outstanding!!  Alan Parsons eat your heart out!! Liked everything, great vocal David and the keyboards are amazing and lush. great musicanship all round guys!
Donna's lyric brought to life and the narration was spot on. Its a lot to take in, needs a few listens this one ;)

I have't been visiting here much but you've inspired me to come more often and get involved in some project here.

I have become a faithful android!! Excellent.

Marty
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Wow guys...Simply Wow....I listened to much as it was being conceived and recorded, but the overall effect is FANTASTIC...I had to dig out my old, Rick Wakeman's, "Journey the Center..." this is much better!

Taking the story forward to song 3 is terrific and my personal favorite.
Donna, it's Devine...superbly crafted lyrics, and the compositions are masterful...Great work everyone!!! :)
                         
                                           Sincerely, Johnny


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Amazing production guys. VERY well done. Huge project and a huge undertaking. Only this line up of guys could pull it off. I would love to do something similar some day. Great words Donna. Hat's off to you all for creating this and so well.  8)

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Thanks Marty for the visit and kind words.

Im sure Donna will be thrilled with yout comments.

Cheers
Andy
Donna/Guys this is outstanding!!  Alan Parsons eat your heart out!! Liked everything, great vocal David and the keyboards are amazing and lush. great musicanship all round guys!
Donna's lyric brought to life and the narration was spot on. Its a lot to take in, needs a few listens this one ;)

I have't been visiting here much but you've inspired me to come more often and get involved in some project here.

I have become a faithful android!! Excellent.

Marty


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hey Johnny,

Thanks - glad you liked the final result!!

Journey to the Center of the mind was it? Interestingly theres loads of new prog rock bands - Phideaux, RPWL, The Rocket Scientists, Simon Says to name a few..who have kept the 70s prog rock spirit but in a modren way!

Regards,
Andy

Wow guys...Simply Wow....I listened to much as it was being conceived and recorded, but the overall effect is FANTASTIC...I had to dig out my old, Rick Wakeman's, "Journey the Center..." this is much better!

Taking the story forward to song 3 is terrific and my personal favorite.
Donna, it's Devine...superbly crafted lyrics, and the compositions are masterful...Great work everyone!!! :)
                         
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Hey Dave,

Thanks for dropping by and the kind words  :)! Billy's production is top notch indeed.

Cheers
Andy

Amazing production guys. VERY well done. Huge project and a huge undertaking. Only this line up of guys could pull it off. I would love to do something similar some day. Great words Donna. Hat's off to you all for creating this and so well.  8)

Dave


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I'm deeply impressed by that fine masterpiece! every little part and every little thing is perfect. And of course the whole opus.
Great noises too  :) Lay back, close your eyes and enjoy the film!
words and music - a perfect match. Great vocals.


 

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