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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: jeff on November 21, 2006, 06:52:24 AM

Title: Can I Come With You
Post by: jeff on November 21, 2006, 06:52:24 AM

Thanks again to everyone who endured the collaboration process on this song.

Everyone did a great job! Sorry it took so long :)

Jeff
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Can I Come With You

Vocals: Kerie Geni
Acoustic Guitar: Sergio
Drums: Gary Sauer
Bass & Keys: Jeff Smith
Guitar Solo & Mix: Andrew Curtis
Lyrics: Jeff Smith & Darrin Wyse

http://www.smithconsulting.net/smith/music/Come_With_You_16-11-06.wma

http://www.smithconsulting.net/smith/music/Come_With_You_16-11-06.ape

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: groverk on November 24, 2006, 11:25:24 AM

Cool 8)

Ken

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: jeff on November 24, 2006, 07:18:20 PM

Ken.

Thanks for giving it a spin :)

Jeff

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: NickT on November 24, 2006, 10:46:59 PM

Nice job everyone!

Nick

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: jeff on November 25, 2006, 04:03:18 PM

Thanks Nick.

I was thinking of changing the spelling of "Come".

Give the song a whole new meaning..hhehe :)

hmmm...

J

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: NickT on November 25, 2006, 04:05:44 PM

Quote from: jeff on November 25, 2006, 04:03:18 PM

Thanks Nick.

I was thinking of changing the spelling of "Come".

Give the song a whole new meaning..hhehe :)

hmmm...

J

LOL

I'd leave it...broader audience! :)

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: YouTube on November 25, 2006, 05:05:02 PM

Nice song.


Good Work Jeff.

I like the drums. Just a tad too many fills. Great drumming.  Listened to the song once so far. On my second listen as I'm writing this.  The strings and piano and acoustic are excellent. The lyrics are well written and the song has a nice laid back feel. Bass is cool but the drums have too many fills in the second half of the song.
Strings are nice they give it that cool feel. This type of song could of worked well with a Spanish guitar, nylon string riffs here and there as well. Nice production as it is but those drum fills kind are too many. PLaying bass myself I look at this two ways, either the bass has to be equal with the drums in action or the drums should  have less fills. The bass serves well being basic because, it's a laid back song so the only thing I would do is have less drum fills. But that's just my opinion and to someone else they may not have the same opinion.

Thanks for posting the option of dl'ng the "ape" as well. That's very nice of you. I dl'd a copy and will spin it every now & then

Best Regards

Tubes

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: jeff on November 25, 2006, 10:38:43 PM

Hey Tubes.

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Its appreciated! :)

Jeff

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: Dove4Simon on December 05, 2006, 10:53:13 AM

Jeff,
Sounds great.  You all did a wonderful job. Very, very nice.

Lisa


PS...I agree with Nick, leave the spelling as is... ;D

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: jeff on December 05, 2006, 11:47:20 AM

Thanks for listening.

The other title would work better for the porn empire I hope to build one day.   :P

J

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: Letizia on December 05, 2006, 01:49:38 PM

too pretty a song for porn... perhaps softcore, but that's just a waste of time.

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: jeff on December 05, 2006, 02:12:40 PM

I dunno.. I wouldn't mind hearing Kerie whipser "that" in my ear ;)

ok...is there a full moon or something??

Quote from: Letizia on December 05, 2006, 01:49:38 PM

too pretty a song for porn... perhaps softcore, but that's just a waste of time.

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: Paulo on December 06, 2006, 04:41:24 AM

Beatifull

Title: Re: Can I Come With You
Post by: Letizia on December 07, 2006, 01:07:02 PM

afaic, there's always a full moon.