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Title: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: Songwriter on December 09, 2006, 09:24:34 AM

This is one of my absolute favorites that John and I have ever done

Comments welcome

"Miss Tery"
Lyrics: Cal Francis DiFalco
Music: John Lawrence Schick
Vocal: ERIK
http://www.artistcollaboration.com/~johnny-boy/Miss%20Tery-J-Mix.mp3

Everyone who knows her
Says I'm getting closer
To finding what she keeps inside
But every time I see her
I don't think that I can free her
She's got so much she has to hide

She's teaching me a lesson
Cause she has me confessing
To things I'd never thought I'd say
And when it comes to her turn
To tell me things that she has learned
She simply turns away

Yes, she has a history
A complicated mystery
Won't play the game of kiss n tell
And so there's no denying
She'll only leave me trying
To find the heaven in her hell

Her eyes are always troubled
And underneath the rubble
I know that there's a caring soul
And maybe sweet forgiveness
Will find a cause for living
And help her to release control

She's magic, she's tragic
Careful or you'll catch it
She's got a way to draw you in
Her beauty is revealing
Her manner is concealing
Don't want to know just where she's been

Yes, she has a history
A complicated mystery
Won't play the game of kiss n tell
And so there's no denying
She'll only leave me trying
To find the heaven in her hell

Title: Re: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: Paulo on December 09, 2006, 10:18:46 AM

So beautifull  :)

Title: Re: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: jeff on December 09, 2006, 01:11:15 PM

ooh...nice! :)

Title: Re: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: NickT on December 09, 2006, 01:36:19 PM

Very nice guys!

Nick

Title: Re: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: youtube on December 10, 2006, 02:21:12 PM

Piano Master-Piece!

I agree "VERY BEAUTIFUL"..

I think the production is "A MASTER PIECE"...

The melody is very inventive and beautiful. There are no boring parts. You delivered well and I like the vocals as well. They stand out very nice. Some hats here and there like they have in Jazz may have helped make it even more fantastic. What a wonderful vocal delivery in-deed. I say "A WELL WRITTEN SONG" and the feel of the vocal make the story even more interesting. Like an opera... I almost spelled Op rah. He He..

Love it!.................

Cheers

Tubes

Title: Re: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: Johnny-Boy on December 11, 2006, 10:39:39 AM

Thanks guys!

Cal, definitely one of my "Top 5" picks.

Best, John

Title: Re: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: sergio on December 11, 2006, 12:19:03 PM

Cal & John,

ya know I'm a HUGE fan of what you guys do - frankly though i have problems keeping up with everything you've done - 'cause there is so many.
But since this said 'one of the best' I made sure to listen -- and i fully agree -TOP shelf...  and who is Erik ? fine job by him as well.

sergio  8)

Title: Re: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: Letizia on December 12, 2006, 02:04:15 AM

wanna echo what everyone else has said... very well done

Title: Re: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: Studioplayer on December 12, 2006, 04:47:54 PM

Very nice guys. Interesting voice.  8)

Title: Re: Miss Tery- One of the best that John and I have ever done imo
Post by: Johnny-Boy on December 12, 2006, 07:50:53 PM

Thanks guys!

Best, John