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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: AndyG6508 on December 25, 2015, 01:56:19 PM

Title: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: AndyG6508 on December 25, 2015, 01:56:19 PM
Another tune done before the year end  :).

Smithie started the ball rolling by setting Bob's reflective lyric to a spacey arrangement with a great vocal.

Then Henry (who plays a super reverb/echo drenched solo) and I added to the arrangement to bring it to the form as it stands now.

Next, SteveC dropped in with a drums track which suited the song perfectly.

Finally, Henry wrapped it up with a fine mix/master.

LOOKING GLASS: (Lyric: Bob Wood, Arrangement: SmithC/AndyG/Henry Mittnacht)
bpm=98

Intro
Preverse1
Verse1
I can't believe it
How can this be ?                                
the world I once knew
is only fantasy ...
Can someone tell me
if it's real?              
I need to know
how the others feel                                  

Verse2
I can't deny it
could be deranged
the life that I once had -
no longer pre-ordained
will someone show me
if they can ?
try not to lie -
I'm a simple man

Chorus:
Behold the looking glass
strangers behind the scenes
watching as I pass                                                            
don't tell me I'm insane
I've heard it all before
And saw something more
So many shattered mirrors blocking every door...

Preverse 1st solo

Verse3:
can't understand this -
what is it I see ?
a world of flashing colors                                              
glowing in front of me  
                                                                                                                                
Can someone tell me who they are ? -
Are they from another star ?                                      
Missing time...lost memories
nightmares are the hidden key                                  

Chorus:
Behold the looking glass
strangers behind the scenes
watching as I pass                                                            
don't tell me I'm insane
I've heard it all before
And saw something more
So many shattered mirrors blocking every door...

Solo Section
Repeat Chorus
Outro

Credits:
Bob Wood: Lyrics
SmithC: Original music/arrangement, synthesizers, lead & backing vocals
Henry Mittnacht: Synthesizers, Guitars, backing vocals, mix/master
Andy Gupta: Bass, Arrangement
Steve Collins: Drums
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: gbm on December 25, 2015, 02:54:44 PM
Nicely done!

That synth echo at the start should have been in the ending too, that would have tied it together a bit more IMO.

 ;D ;D ;D

Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: Lyric man on December 26, 2015, 07:50:39 AM
I think you all did a great job !!!! To bad the rest of the world doesn't  get along  as well as  our "international coalition"  does........ ;D ;)............stay tuned for more lyrical ideas, same Bat channel ,Same Bat Forum...
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: rightonthemark on December 26, 2015, 08:33:53 AM
great job by eveyone involved.
i really liked the mix.
felt like a lot of space was created - like every part had its own place carved out perfectly.
nice job gang.
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: cyclone on December 26, 2015, 03:09:09 PM
Cool song, Henry popped the top on an already great collab.
Cyclone
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: Paulo on December 26, 2015, 04:47:28 PM
Nice collab... it all sounds great.
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: AndyG6508 on December 27, 2015, 11:54:32 AM
Thanks everyone for the kind comments!
Andy
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: docmidnite on January 02, 2016, 05:30:05 AM
Yes, turned out really great, finally!
I must confess that both Andy and Smithie helped me a lot doing the guitar. I initially felt lost bc I really hadn't a clou what to play... And these guys pointed me to the right direction!
Thank you, guys! :-*
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: r4m on January 02, 2016, 10:12:34 PM
Nice to see you guys making some great music these days! Great job all!!!
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: SmithC on January 03, 2016, 11:12:11 PM
Pleasure my friend  ;D

Your solo is amazing....the best part of the song :) :)
 

Yes, turned out really great, finally!
I must confess that both Andy and Smithie helped me a lot doing the guitar. I initially felt lost bc I really hadn't a clou what to play... And these guys pointed me to the right direction!
Thank you, guys! :-*
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: Zax on January 04, 2016, 10:10:59 PM
Great song Guys!! 

I love the sound and the mood of this... And everybody's performances are top notch!   8)

Frank
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: SmithC on January 05, 2016, 07:01:40 AM
Hey Frank

Wonderful to know you liked the song  :) :)

Smithie


Great song Guys!! 

I love the sound and the mood of this... And everybody's performances are top notch!   8)

Frank
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: CrossEyedHenry on January 06, 2016, 12:28:18 PM
Wow.....Amazing mix/master Henry !!  Top notch my friend !!  I really love this tune...great spacey feel yet has a foot tappin' rockin' vibe.  Fantastic musicianship all the way around !!  Thanks guys for allowing me to be a part of it !!      Steve
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: Lyric man on January 09, 2016, 08:34:59 AM
I love how this came out ....great job all...Its a dream come true having my lyrics put to music/vocals....and talented musicians at that !!!  Bob
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: Billy on January 09, 2016, 12:19:42 PM
Ooh Yes! Nicely done Gentlemen.

Excellent production and great playing by everyone. A very professional sounding end result.
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: docmidnite on January 10, 2016, 07:06:27 AM
Thank you guys for your comments!

btw: Andy, I didn“t do any buvocals on this one ;D
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: docmidnite on February 19, 2016, 12:06:16 PM
Hey guys,
from time to time I take part on a German platform called www.recording.de.
They run a monthly chartshow...

Looking Glas was voted on No 4  ;D
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: AndyG6508 on February 19, 2016, 07:26:42 PM
That's way cool Henry, good to know :)

Andy

Hey guys,
from time to time I take part on a German platform called www.recording.de.
They run a monthly chartshow...

Looking Glas was voted on No 4  ;D
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: SmithC on February 19, 2016, 09:18:58 PM
Hey Henry

This is a great moment for the band :)

Need to have many more together  ;D

Smithie


Hey guys,
from time to time I take part on a German platform called www.recording.de.
They run a monthly chartshow...

Looking Glas was voted on No 4  ;D
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: Lyric man on February 20, 2016, 11:43:47 AM
that's really cool,Henry :) :)
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: catfish on March 02, 2016, 09:12:28 PM
groovie....great mix!.
y'all done much to enjoy...

Al...
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: Lyric man on March 03, 2016, 05:33:24 AM
thanks so much Al...
                       Bob ;D
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: SmithC on March 06, 2016, 11:46:31 PM
Thanks Al  :)

Smithie

groovie....great mix!.
y'all done much to enjoy...

Al...
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: McLovin on March 09, 2016, 10:17:48 PM
Now this is smoooooooth!  Love it guys!
Title: Re: Looking Glass (Bob Wood/SmithC/HenryM/AndyG/SteveC)
Post by: AndyG6508 on March 10, 2016, 04:15:14 PM
Much appreciated Jay.

Now this is smoooooooth!  Love it guys!