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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: PaulD on December 06, 2007, 09:27:58 AM

Title: Love Again
Post by: PaulD on December 06, 2007, 09:27:58 AM

;D ;D finally got one finished.



Ali Kat  : Vocals/melody/Lyrics
Guitar : Studioplayer
PaulD : Keyboards
Bass  : Walter
Mixing : NickT

When the road leads me down that path one more time
I promise I'll try
When the wind blows a chance by me I'll see
If I can get by

Chorus
But my heart is worn
It feels just like I
Have been broken and scorned
The pain is too surreal
I can't hang on
I don't know if I can love again

When the trees begin to bloom in spring
i'll still be on my own
Wehn the leaves begin to wilt and die
I'll know, my hearts not alone

chorus

bridge
I'm traveling down a lonely road
A change of wind is my only hope
This heart has shriveled into dust
Along with my trust.


Thanks everyone for helping me out ;).

PaulD

Title: Re: Love Again
Post by: CosmicDolphin on December 06, 2007, 05:24:13 PM

I think this is a really beautiful song.....my only wish is to hear it with a real acoustic guitar instead of a keyboard imitation :'(

I think it's the best ballad I've heard on the MC, and could really be magical with the right balance instruments on it, and a proper ending.

As it stands it's still very good, and a heartfelt vocal by Ali.

CosmicD

Title: Re: Love Again
Post by: PaulD on December 07, 2007, 04:25:28 AM

Quote from: CosmicDolphin on December 06, 2007, 05:24:13 PM

I think this is a really beautiful song.....my only wish is to hear it with a real acoustic guitar instead of a keyboard imitation :'(

I think it's the best ballad I've heard on the MC, and could really be magical with the right balance instruments on it, and a proper ending.

As it stands it's still very good, and a heartfelt vocal by Ali.

CosmicD

Thx CD,

I was debating wether or not to get a real guitar for that part,but as i really liked what i allready had
and wasnt too sure if it could be done in a similar way on the guitar i didnt,maybe i should have asked :-[.

Anyway im happy with the way it turned out.

PaulD

Title: Re: Love Again
Post by: CosmicDolphin on December 07, 2007, 11:16:13 AM

You could always ask for an audition...

I'm sure someone here could pick the same rhythm.

Maybe next time ?....long as it came out how you want that's the most important thing.

Anyway...great song.

CosmicD

Title: Re: Love Again
Post by: Wegman on December 07, 2007, 09:53:17 PM

Beautiful song.

I very much enjoyed it.

IF you ever want some classical guitar on it or anything let me know.

Wegman

Title: Re: Love Again
Post by: PVD on December 07, 2007, 10:02:13 PM

Paul D. and Ali

Very nice.

PVD

Title: Re: Love Again
Post by: Studioplayer on December 11, 2007, 04:38:22 PM

Sounds really nice guys. Glad to have been a part and glad you got one done Paul.  8)

Dave

Title: Re: Love Again
Post by: r4m on December 20, 2007, 06:06:51 PM

Nice song. Great vox! 8)

Title: Re: Love Again
Post by: j on December 23, 2007, 06:26:04 PM

Outstanding!  nice mix and great performances all around.  :)

Title: Re: Love Again
Post by: Appleluza on December 27, 2007, 09:30:33 PM

Good job team.  Nice song.