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Title: Obsession - Sharpola / PVD
Post by: Sharpola on January 11, 2008, 12:39:12 AM

Music - Sharpola
Guitar - NickT
Lyrics - PVD

Obsession

(v1)
Yesterday came and went
Like the scent of your perfume
Another day that passes by
And here I sit self consumed

Alone in a dark corner
Leaning forward, eyes closed
I'm covered in remorse   
But feeling fully exposed

(chorus)
I'm still caught up in you
So lost in thoughts of you
There's no question
You're my obsession
You're my obsession

You saw all the secrets
On the dark side of my soul
All the insecurities
And my need to control

(bridge)
Now I don't look too proud with my head bowed
And my chin resting on my chest
I should have known I couldn't own you
I was blinded and obsessed

(chorus)
I'm still caught up in you
So lost in thoughts of you
There's no question
You're my obsession
You're my obsession

Title: Re: Obsession - Sharpola / PVD
Post by: NickT on January 11, 2008, 07:01:47 PM

Sounds good to me Ray! :)

Nice job and The lyrics are very cool PVD!

Thanks for letting me in on this one.

Nick

Title: Re: Obsession - Sharpola / PVD
Post by: PVD on January 11, 2008, 08:12:53 PM

Ray:

Nice job, even my daugther liked it.  Normally she thinks every thing I am involved with stinks (she's 18, tough critic). 

Nick, your work fit this perfectly.

Ray, thanks for giving this one a chance.

Paul

Title: Re: Obsession - Sharpola / PVD
Post by: Studioplayer on January 14, 2008, 01:41:23 PM

Some more great lyrics.  8) Nice job on this guys. Cool drum groove. Drives along really nicely. Not to over the top. Steady groove and some great singing. Nice touch.  8)

Dave

Title: Re: Obsession - Sharpola / PVD
Post by: Sharpola on January 14, 2008, 09:45:44 PM

Thanks guys!


Ray