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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: srvfender on March 22, 2008, 10:51:43 AM

Title: Out in the cold
Post by: srvfender on March 22, 2008, 10:51:43 AM

Lyrics- Zmulls
Music, guitar and vocals-srvfender(AJ)
Bass- Bassic Soul (Preston)
Keys-Jaaman (Jay)
Percussion-Jman (Jerry)
Mix and Master- Davidinoz (Dave)

Very happy with this result and the excellent contributions from everyone involved.

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: CosmicDolphin on March 22, 2008, 12:04:25 PM

I like this ...very haunting

Suits your voice really well AJ , this is the kind of song I think you do best and the lyrics paint a great picture.

Excellent job all around and a nice mix.

CD

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: srvfender on March 26, 2008, 04:41:40 PM

Thanks Mark,

I lost track of this. Hopefully there will be more feedback.

Thanks,

AJ

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: Bassic_Soul on March 26, 2008, 09:19:46 PM

AJ,

I'm really happy with the final mix, thanks for letting me be a part of this tune.  8)

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: PVD on March 26, 2008, 10:18:41 PM

AJ - I meant to comment on this earlier, it is very smooth and you've done justice to the emotive lyrics.  Of course I have to comment on the lyrics (nice job Z) because that is my area. 
BTW, it would be good to post them.

Anyway, nice job everyone.

Paul

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: srvfender on March 27, 2008, 06:14:00 AM

Good Point Paul, so here's the lyrics.   AJ

OUT IN THE COLD
Lyrics Copyright 2006 by Z. Mulls

(v1)

She hasn't come home yet
The girls and I play in the snow
Temperature in the twenties
Like it was a December ago

Throwing snowballs and shrieking
Raising holy hell
We hardly notice
How far the mercury fell

(chorus)

Cause Out in the Cold
It's warm
The temperature's barely felt
Out in the cold
It's warm
Enough that a heart can melt
When you're with the ones you love
You can weather any storm
It's warm
Out in the cold

(v2)

Amy's halfway through fifth grade
Always got her face in a book
Kate, she'll find dinosaur bones
If she finds the right place to look

They grab my hat and start to laugh
Playing a game
Putting it on the snowman
And calling him by my name

(repeat chorus)

Cause Out in the Cold
It's warm
The temperature's barely feltOut in the cold
It's warm
Enough that a heart can melt
When you're with the ones you love
You can weather any storm
It's warm
Out in the cold



(bridge)

She comes home and apologizes for being late
Tells the girls to go inside and walks me to the gate
All of the tensions come flooding back
All the suspicions, and the lines of attack

(v3)

We review some arrangements
I leave before starting a spat
The snowman waves in the rearview
Standing guard with my hat

Every year they get older
New line are crossed
I wait out the winter
Fighting against the frost

(new chorus)

Out in the cold
Again
Surrendering by degrees
Out in the cold
Again
Enough that a heart can freeze
When you miss the ones you love
Every hour feels like ten
Again
Out in the cold

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: Studioplayer on March 27, 2008, 11:59:03 AM

Fantastic song AJ. Everything sounds great. Love the lyrics. You seem to have captured the story very well with your music. Nice mood. I'm sure Z. will be happy with what you did. Really a great song. You produce some cool music.  8)

Dave

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: srvfender on March 28, 2008, 05:03:34 AM

Thanks Dave! Its guys like you that make a site like this fun (and addicting)

AJ

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: CosmicDolphin on March 28, 2008, 05:26:06 AM

Quote from: srvfender on March 28, 2008, 05:03:34 AM

Thanks Dave! Its guys like you that make a site like this fun (and addicting)

AJ

That and writing good songs guys !....I've put this one on the Ipod..and I don't do that unless I really like it.

CD

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: NickT on March 28, 2008, 10:06:26 AM

AJ -

Very nice. Thr lyrics are haunting and the delivery heartfelt. Everyon did a great job.

Production is great.

Nice job all!

Nick

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: srvfender on March 29, 2008, 12:28:55 PM

Thanks Nick, for both the comments and the venue that makes this and other works available to everyone here.

AJ

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: zmulls on March 29, 2008, 01:22:41 PM

I've said it before, but want to make sure AJ knows how much I appreciate his taking this on and making the words "sing" so well.  And everyone who contributed -- jaaman, JMan, bassic_soul, Davidinoz -- for their time, effort and talent.

As a lyricist, it's hard for me to jump in on this site, as once the words are done the musicians take over.   I'm happy to have been part of this project.

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: Jman on March 29, 2008, 06:38:55 PM

Wow.... I somehow missed this in the Finished works... Just grateful to take part with AJ and the rest of the talented group on this one. I really like this one and am glad the music and vocals were able to catch the "emotion" of Z's lyrics.  8) J

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: j on March 30, 2008, 08:50:52 AM

 very touching, and the right chemistry on this song. It is one of those songs that paints a vivid picture. Very close to home for some of us, I would guess. Thanks for letting me participate! You all did a great job on this one.

j`

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: jwoo10 on March 31, 2008, 12:30:25 AM

Fine performances, Fine Production and an excellent message/song !

Kudos to all!

Title: Re: Out in the cold
Post by: srvfender on April 01, 2008, 07:09:55 PM

Quote from: jwoo10 on March 31, 2008, 12:30:25 AM

Fine performances, Fine Production and an excellent message/song !

Kudos to all!

Thanks Jwoo. Always nice to hear from people outside the project. Appreciate the feedback.

AJ