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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Casia - lyricist on August 29, 2008, 10:23:58 PM
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Hi:
I wrote this lyric last Saturday, August 23rd and Ray (Sharpola) picked it up and here it is all done. He's amazing ::). Thanks Ray, I love it. Let me know what you guys think.
Untrap Me
(V1)
I'm livin' to die
I'm dieing to live
Pouring my life
Through an empty sieve
Feeling nothing at all
Spending my days
Walkin' thru malls
(Lift)
I wanna get dirty
Roll in the mud
Sprinkle my days
With a bit of crud
(Chorus)
The easy life isn't for me
I need a little pain
A lot of misery
To get me through, through the day
To feel my blood rage
Un-trap me from my dieing cage
(V2)
I wanna tell the world
How I feel inside
Take to the highway
On a lonely ride
Wash my life down the drain
Just so I can
Climb up again
(Lift)
My life is to live
Live is to love
I'm stepping out
Of my rubber gloves
(Chorus)
The easy life isn't for me
I need a little pain
A lot of misery
To get me through, through the day
To feel my blood rage
Un-trap me from my dieing cage
(Bridge)
I'm tired of livin' on Easy Street
Gotta get off my ass
Get back on my feet
I'm coming for love
Down this lonely road
You can sprinkle spring water
On this dieing toad
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(Down this lonely road)
(Chorus)
The easy life isn't for me
I need a little pain
A lot of misery
To get me through, through the day
To feel my blood rage
(Un-trap me from my dying cage)
(Chorus)
The easy life isn't for me
I need a little pain
A lot of misery
To get me through, through the day
To feel my blood rage
To un-trap me from my dying cage
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Sounds great to me!
8)
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Hey Casia and Ray
I like the rhythmic change between the verse and bridge/chorus very nice.The strings towards the end are also very effective.
Well done :)
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Nice work !! :)
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Thanks Nick, Stonehead and Tricia:
Hey, Nick and Stonehead have new avatars - cool!!! I'm assuming that's really you guys, not some photo you pulled from Photoland 8).
Later...Casia
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Hey, Nick and Stonehead have new avatars - cool!!! I'm assuming that's really you guys, not some photo you pulled from Photoland 8).
HAAAA! If mine was a photoland special would it still be that ugly ........ I actually look more like the chimp on my last avatar ;D
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HAAAA! A hairy drummer or a spaced-out chimp - same thing - yes /no???
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Hey, Nick and Stonehead have new avatars - cool!!! I'm assuming that's really you guys, not some photo you pulled from Photoland 8).
HAAAA! If mine was a photoland special would it still be that ugly ........ I actually look more like the chimp on my last avatar ;D
Not ugly! :) better than the monkey. ;) it's nice to see who I'm talking to.
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Thank you Tricia and Casia I have no idea what you mean....... where did I put that banana ;D ;D ;D ;) :P
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This is top notch....I was half expecting to hear some distorted grungey guitars to come in on the 2nd chorus ala 'Creed' but you resisted and went with a more sultry cello arrangement. 8) It all works perfectly.
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Nice stuff...mix sounds nice.
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Sounds good.
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Great job, Ray.. I like your lyrics here Casia. Good mix as well.
Jay
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Thanks Nick, Stonehead and Tricia:
Hey, Nick and Stonehead have new avatars - cool!!! I'm assuming that's really you guys, not some photo you pulled from Photoland 8).
Later...Casia
LOL :)
Yeah, that's me. I may have to change the pick in the player for Ian.
nick