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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Casia - lyricist on October 17, 2008, 06:09:47 PM

Title: Give In To My Love
Post by: Casia - lyricist on October 17, 2008, 06:09:47 PM

Hi:  This was done with another outside collaborator from the U.S.  It was suppose to have the feeling of the band "Bread".  But I'm not familiar with that band so I don't know if it has that feeling  ;D ;D

Lyrics:  Katherine Wong
Vocals/Music:  Ron Fletcher

Give In To My Love

(V1)
You say you have a jeweled heart
And you won't give it away
Not for a king's ransom
No matter what I say

For each and every precious gem
That sparkles deep within
Can only belong to one
I'm telling you I am him

(CHORUS)
Give in to my love
Give in to my love
Give in to my love
Give in to my love

(V2)
You say you've tried to keep your heart
Safe from getting hurt
But my persistence baby
Is like a sweet dessert

And I willl send you flowers
Call you on the phone
And write you love letters
So you will never ever be alone

(CHORUS)
Give in to my love
Give in to my love
Give in to my love
Give in to my love

(V3)
If I fell down to my knees
to tell you my love is guaranteed
Pout my lips
And sink some ships
Why won't you give in to my love
When will you give in to my love

(BRIDGE)
If the right man came along
And tempted you with his charm
Would you be smart, would you be strong
Or would you run into his arms
Into his arms
And would you give into his heart
Why won't you give into my love
When will you give into my love

(OUTRO)
If I fell down to my knees
And tell you my love is guaranteed
Pout my lips
And sink some ships
Why won't you give into my love
When will you give into my love
When will you give into my love

Title: Re: Give In To My Love
Post by: Tricia41 on October 17, 2008, 07:01:16 PM

Nice write casia!! :)

Title: Re: Give In To My Love
Post by: Donna on October 19, 2008, 03:04:15 PM

This is pretty, casia. And yes, it does have a slight 'Bread' feel to it. ;)
I think it's in the singer's voice.

Donna

Title: Re: Give In To My Love
Post by: Casia - lyricist on October 19, 2008, 03:12:53 PM

Thanks Tricia and Donna.

Actually Ron isn't an outside collaborator.  Didn't know he was here, guess he keeps in hiding.  His name here is Southern Ash.

Title: Re: Give In To My Love
Post by: southern ash on October 19, 2008, 08:04:07 PM

thank's for the kind words ladys,and to casia for her patence and also for the great lyric,i only hoped  that the arrangement and the music were in the same class as her  words,just joined up here,casia has said that website is a very great website,thank's again.  ron  f. {southern ash}

Title: Re: Give In To My Love
Post by: CosmicDolphin on October 21, 2008, 04:29:27 PM

Has a very Retro feel...nice lyrics Casia  :)

CD