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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Billy on December 07, 2008, 12:32:43 PM

Title: Poor Jaded, Faded Rose
Post by: Billy on December 07, 2008, 12:32:43 PM
Another fine example of storytelling from Donna set to music by me and help from the singing 'Belle of Missouri' Danna Moore. Special thanks to Jim (JCS) for his particular skill with drums. It was a fun tune to do. Donna - there's an mp3 version for you as well.


POOR JADED, FADED ROSE


Author of lyrics - Donna Devine
Lead vocal - Danna Moore
Drums - Jim JCS
Music and backing vocals - Billy Playle


She rises at six, paints on her makeup
Won't open the door if her face is undone
Traces of sleep, tangled of nightmares
Are quickly revealed in the glare of the sun

She was lovely, once, a new rose in summer
Skin silky smooth and wide eyes of blue

Poor jaded faded rose
Wilting near the phone
She stole other women's husbands
But now she's all alone

She flutters her lashes and flirts with the waiter
Who seats her politely at a table for one
She goes through the motions to keep his attention
But deep inside, her sparkle has gone

Decades have etched a deep map of mem'ries
A life measured out by men that she's known

Poor jaded faded rose
Wilting near the phone
She broke other women's dreams
But now she's all alone

She can't go on anymore
Lord, she can't go back
Doesn't know how she got here
Or got so far off track

Poor jaded faded rose
Wilting near the phone
She stole other women's husbands
But now she's all alone

Poor jaded faded rose
Wilting near the phone
She broke other women's dreams
But now she's so alone


Copyright. Donna Devine
Title: Re: Poor Jaded, Faded Rose
Post by: Tricia41 on December 07, 2008, 12:41:21 PM
Very nice music and lyrics!   :)  And such a sweet voice too!

 :)
Title: Re: Poor Jaded, Faded Rose
Post by: Donna on December 07, 2008, 02:59:22 PM
Thanks, Tricia.  ;)  Everyone did a superb job! :D

Donna
Title: Re: Poor Jaded, Faded Rose
Post by: Studioplayer on December 08, 2008, 12:40:34 PM
I had to really refrain from listening to this when it was getting close to finished. I only heard the music but not the vocals. Saw it was close to finished so I just waited for it to pop up here in the finished section.

Worth the wait!! Wow!! what great vocals!! Cool voice.  8) Interesting voice!! NICE. I love this. I think I'll play it quite a few times today so I can hear all the nuances. Nice stuff. Beautiful song!!  :)

Dave
Title: Re: Poor Jaded, Faded Rose
Post by: ukulelelady on December 08, 2008, 02:52:08 PM
Studioplayer:  Your check's in the mail!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: Poor Jaded, Faded Rose
Post by: Donna on December 08, 2008, 03:05:32 PM
Shhhhhhhhhhh, Danna. Now they'll all want a check!  ;D

Seriously, though, thanks, Dave. Billy et al. did a splendid job with this. :)

Donna
Title: Re: Poor Jaded, Faded Rose
Post by: Donna on December 18, 2008, 09:07:57 AM
Aiden et al., I just wanted to share this recent comment from someone on a forum where I played the track.
(It's just one of many kudos, but I thought it particularly pleasing.)

"This is a spectacular recording. Your guys have done a great job with this. Congratulations."

Again, thanks, everyone.  ;)

Donna