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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: stoman on March 08, 2009, 10:04:55 AM

Title: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: stoman on March 08, 2009, 10:04:55 AM

A song with one Steve, two Stephens and one Steffen - and, most important of all, with the one and only Tricia. ;)

Music: Steffen Offermann & Tricia Dovidio
Lyrics: Tricia Dovidio & Stephen Kerry
Vocals: Tricia Dovidio
Drums: Steve Gardner
Bass: Stephen Murphy
Piano & Synthesizer: Steffen Offermann
Arranged & mixed by Steffen Offermann

YOU HAVE EVERY RIGHT TO GO

Clip my wings
And leave me here
Leave me here alone
It seems this is about as close
As I can get to home

   I didn't even consider you
   Or how my actions hurt you so
   To forgive me is more than I deserve
   You have every right to go

Take your things
And the few good memories
Start your life anew
I'll remain
To discover quickly
I'll be the same old fool

It doesn't mean I didn't try
Or I didn't once love you
It's just that I'm
A creature of my own bad habits   
And not good enough for you

Sorry for
The wasted times
For you there's still time left
I'll have time to ponder
Things I should regret

   I didn't even consider you
   Or how my actions hurt you so
   To forgive me is more than I deserve
   You have every right to go

Clip my wings
And leave me here
Leave me here alone
It seems this is about as close
As I can get to home

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: Tricia41 on March 08, 2009, 10:13:34 AM

Quote from: stoman on March 08, 2009, 10:04:55 AM

A song with one Steve, two Stephens and one Steffen - and, most important of all, with the one and only Tricia. ;)

Oh my gosh! That's adorable!!  ;D How often does that happen?!  ;D too cool!

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: stevegardner on March 08, 2009, 10:36:50 AM

Thanks for letting me play on this...nice work all!

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: soulfrontier on March 08, 2009, 01:51:03 PM

You Have Every Right To be proud of this song.  ;)

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: Tricia41 on March 08, 2009, 02:20:11 PM

Quote from: soulfrontier on March 08, 2009, 01:51:03 PM

You Have Every Right To be proud of this song.  ;)

aaaawww :) :) :) :)

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: bssistmurf on March 08, 2009, 06:36:07 PM

I too just want to say thanks for letting me play on this. It is a really nice tune. Hope I can do more with you in the future.

Murph

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: stoman on March 09, 2009, 01:41:16 PM

So do I, Murph! :)

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: Tricia41 on June 22, 2009, 01:09:49 PM

Some new reviews..:

"Another wonderful collaboration... love the brush drums so much. Could be a "female answer to Beatles" - indeed a very classic sounding song, with the right nuances in your expression. Also love the sweet harmony guitars, piano and bass... Hmmmm, I'm flying."



   "i looked, looked twice, hey i know this face. this is steffen (stoman). i'd he first years ago in another portal. hey tricia, i'm a fan of him :)
... and its time to be a fan of yours ... :)
i'd heard so often your great songs or collaborations with you. a lot of talent and personality is in your music."

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: stoman on June 22, 2009, 02:15:47 PM

Nice comments - thanks for letting us know, Tricia! :)

Where did you get them?

Regards,
  Steffen

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: Tricia41 on June 22, 2009, 02:17:34 PM

Indiemusicworks

Title: Re: You Have Every Right To Go
Post by: CosmicDolphin on July 09, 2009, 03:14:13 AM

Good one, really nice mix - I like the drums...congrats to all.

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