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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: cyclone on September 19, 2009, 11:48:46 AM

Title: Shooting STar
Post by: cyclone on September 19, 2009, 11:48:46 AM

Thanks to all who contributed to this song I am flabbergasted by the way it turned out.Sorry It took so long but it kept missing that little spark and I think I found it see if you don`t agree.

Tricia: Awesome vocals Awesome lyrics
Docmidnite: Awesome guitar,strings, and keeping the song together
Preston:Awesome Bass throughout but love the way you ended it
SteveG.:Awesome drums Spot on


I mixed this with computer speakers hope it sounds good to ya.

                            Cyclone

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: Tricia41 on September 19, 2009, 12:08:19 PM

 :) :)

Yes! Thanks Cyclone!  8)

Lyrics:


Shooting Star
Tricia41 (c)2009

A little girl on her daddy's knee
said ,"what will I be?"
a dancer, a moviestar?
or just a mommy?

as they sat singing lullabies
he would hold her and say,
"Your voice is like an angel, child.
You'll be a shooting star..
some day,"

The young lady was off to school
singing with the band.
all the while her dad remained
her number one fan

He still remembers the little girl
on his knee that day
she's now become the shooting star
but don't go too far
 away
don't go too far away

So now she travels the world
singing her songs
her daddy will follow her
he'll be singing along.

He's so proud of his shooting star
the whole world can see
inside he says she will always be
Daddy's little girl
to me

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: stevegardner on September 19, 2009, 01:15:22 PM

Good work you guys!! Thanks for letting me be part of this one.....SG

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: Vincent on September 19, 2009, 11:27:30 PM

Good vocal melody in this one... 8)

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: Stoney on September 21, 2009, 04:48:53 AM

A cool innocent feel ...very nice


Well done all

Ian

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: cyclone on September 25, 2009, 03:35:28 AM

Thanks all,
                I can`t believe I have a finished song. Is MCS the best or what? It`s great to know even an amateur like me accomplish something.As Paul once said I get by with a little help from my freinds.Thanks Again.

                           Cyclone

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: srvfender on September 26, 2009, 12:22:38 PM

Congrats Cyclone. Turned out nice. Good job everyone. :)

AJ

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: docmidnite on September 27, 2009, 10:38:02 AM

Hi Cy,
well it seems god things came to a good end!
I like the mix and I always loved this song!
Lyrics and Tricias singing is so beautiful almost china!

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: CosmicDolphin on September 27, 2009, 01:49:41 PM

Nice song, probably deserves a bit clearer mix but the idea shines through.

CD

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: Studioplayer on October 01, 2009, 02:10:57 PM

Nice one Cyclone. A really feel good tune. I like this a lot.  8)

Dave

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: Paulo on October 11, 2009, 04:09:11 PM

I like this Cyclone, nice indeed.

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: peterk1 on October 14, 2009, 10:59:28 AM

A totally charming and very sweet song. Congratulations.
It's iPodded.

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: Tricia41 on October 14, 2009, 11:07:41 AM

 :) :) thanks so much everyone.  :)

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: AndyG6508 on October 14, 2009, 12:33:41 PM

Hi Gang,

I dont know how I missed this one - till now!

A great little song, lovely melody almost McCartney-esque. Really like the tambourine intro and the economic use of the orchestration. The acoustic guitar playing thoughout is warm, and the rhythm section is spot on for the feel.

And finally Tricia, a great vocal - how many "hits" do you have now??

Cheers
Andy

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: McLovin on October 14, 2009, 10:14:39 PM

Yup very nice song with clear instrumentation and vocals.

Good job guys and gal!

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: riggorog on October 15, 2009, 08:10:12 PM

Nice tune everybody! I like the lyrics/melody Tricia :)

Roger

Title: Re: Shooting STar
Post by: detune on October 15, 2009, 08:40:49 PM

Very nice song with touching lyrics.  Cool acoustic riff. :)