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Title: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: Casia - lyricist on February 22, 2010, 06:06:22 PM
Hi:  Okay, this is the best we can do to meet our deadline for this song for Wired Magazine's Album in a Month for February.


I'm Wasted...You're Tasteless
Casia - Lyrics
HotRocker - Vocals and melody
DelVal - Composition and rythm guitar
Tracy Knight - Lead guitar
SoundFlow - drums and mix

(V1)
I'm sad to say
You ruined my day
Now I'm wasted
You're tasteless
Like sand that runs
Between my teeth
I have no reason
To believe that you and me
Are meant to be
And everything that I desire
Will burn like feathers in a fire

(Chorus)
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
You've got nothing baby
Without me you're an empty bowl

(V2)
You cast a spell
One night in hell
Now I'm wasted...
And you're tasteless...
The two of  us
We have no trust
But what we have
Is so much more than lust
Cause I have you
And you have me
And that is all that is meant to be
Well then, that is all that is meant to be

(Chorus)
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
But without me baby
You've got nothing just an empty bowl
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
Yaa without me baby
You're nothing just a very hungry soul

(Bridge)
And there is nothing in this make-out world
That you could ever do
To make me want somebody more
Than the way that I want you

- instrumental -

(V1)
I'm sad to say
You ruined my day
Now I'm wasted...
You're tasteless...
Like sand that runs
Between my teeth
I have no reason
To believe that you and me
Are meant to be
And everything that I desire
Will burn like feathers in a fire

(Chorus x 2)
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
But without me baby
You've got nothing just an empty bowl
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
I'm wasted, you're tasteless
Yaa without me baby
You're nothing just a very hungry soul

Oooooooooooooooooo
Title: Re: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: Stoney on February 23, 2010, 03:09:24 AM
Hey Cas

This is a real fun rocker and would be cool live....it actually sounds to me like it was recorded live which is not a bad thing.It has a great raw energy as it is but it would be well worth another production visit when the guys have a bit more time.

Nice one Cas

Cheers Ian
Title: Re: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: Studioplayer on February 23, 2010, 12:27:23 PM
Yeah, not bad. Nice little rocker. Does sound a bit raw. Could be worked out a but more. It's got a good vibe.  :)
Title: Re: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on February 23, 2010, 01:56:53 PM
Nice little track , not keen on the mix though  :-\

CD
Title: Re: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: Casia - lyricist on February 23, 2010, 02:09:53 PM
You wanna mix this CD I'll get you the seps... this group, well, just not the best mixers!!
Title: Re: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on February 23, 2010, 02:15:14 PM
Quote from: Casia - lyricist on February 23, 2010, 02:09:53 PM
You wanna mix this CD I'll get you the seps... this group, well, just not the best mixers!!

Kinda up to my neck in mixes ( I have 4 to do ) right now...

Dave is looking for mix practice I believe ...let him loose on something he didn't play on  >:D

CD
Title: Re: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: Studioplayer on February 23, 2010, 02:40:18 PM
What Dave? I didn't play on this.  ???
Title: Re: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on February 23, 2010, 03:07:44 PM
Quote from: Studioplayer on February 23, 2010, 02:40:18 PM
What Dave? I didn't play on this.  ???

Freudian slip , it was meant to say didn't  :-X
Title: Re: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: Casia - lyricist on February 23, 2010, 06:01:56 PM
There's no rush on this.  For the album in a month I'll use use this, it's just for fun.  But, if someone wants to play around so I have a good mix for future posting, I'll post the seps.  You can even redo it with the vocal if you want.
Title: Re: I'm Wasted ... You're Tasteless (First RMP Album in a Month song done)
Post by: AndyG6508 on March 01, 2010, 01:51:41 PM
Cass,

Fun tune...lots of raw punkish energy.

Like the other guys I agree that this needs a remake. Drums specifically!!

good going though

Cheers
Andy