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Title: S.O.B ------>(this is heavy)
Post by: John Cantrell on February 28, 2010, 05:28:38 AM
This is a song me and my buddy made. Took about 2 days or so. But we had a blast =).
Everyone has that one person that they wish would stay in the past. Maybe someone that really screwed you over and changed you into someone bitter. So when they call you from out of the blue, you really dread to talk to them. And when he/she asks "why are you being so mean to me'', you reply with "because you made me a cold hearted son of a b*tch.

thats basically what the song is about.
Its not mixed very well but i still think you guys will enjoy. Lemme know what you think

V1.
Get off your knees
You wont get pitty from me
Im not as easy to please
As every guy you meet

I wont wait
I cant tolerate
You cant justify the
Mistakes you make

Pre-Chorus.
 
Round and round and round it goes
This sh*t stops when I say so.
Bend and bend until I break
Theres no more heart for you to take.

Chorus.

Cuz im a cold hearted destructive son of a bitch.
(Arrogant to a fault and damn proud of it)
Cruel enough that I feel no grief
When I lie to you, like you lie to me.
(SON OF A B*TCH)

V2.

The lies and fraud
The damage that you've caused
Theres no reason why I shouldnt feel this way
The blood the tears, all the wasted years
Cant repair all the errors that you made.

Pre-Chorus.

Round and round and round it goes
This sh*t stops when I say so.
Bend and bend until I break
Theres no more soul for you to take.

Chorus.

Cuz im a cold hearted destructive son of a bitch.
(Arrogant to a fault and damn proud of it)
Cruel enough that I feel no grief
When I lie to you, like you lie to me.
(SON OF A B*TCH)

Bridge.

I cant stand you at all
I cant stand you
I cant stand you at all.

Title: Re: S.O.B ------>(this is heavy)
Post by: ld57 on February 28, 2010, 09:58:36 AM
 8) 8)
The hook is completely NOT radio-friendly, but it's still pretty cool.
Title: Re: S.O.B ------>(this is heavy)
Post by: NickT on February 28, 2010, 11:32:10 AM
Cool tune. I think it could really be commercial with the right production.

I enjoyed the listen.

Nick
Title: Re: S.O.B ------>(this is heavy)
Post by: John Cantrell on February 28, 2010, 11:54:23 AM
thank you!  ;D