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Title: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Sharpola on March 02, 2010, 12:28:44 AM

Lyrics - Casia
Drums - Jwoo
Music - Sharpola

Fighting Yesterday
By Casia

(V1)
I'm fighting back the tears
I'm fighting yesterday
It's a dark, grey morning
And nothing's gone my way
I'm walking down the street
Just to see if you're home
Wrapped up in my pockets
I'm feeling so cold

(Prechorus)
Oh, why did I wait
When I knew you in my heart
All my unspoken words
Were folded in the cards

(Chorus)
I'm fighting back the tears
I'm fighting yesterday
I need one minute
So I can explain
I'm fighting back the tears
I'm fighting yesterday
The slivers in my heart
Are ripping me apart

I'm fighting yesterday
I'm fighting yesterday

(V2)
The rain on your window
Splattered tears of pain
Rolling down my cheeks
I'm a minute too late
The moving van is leaving
You've left me far behind
With just my memories
And a glass of tainted wine

(Prechorus)
(Chorus)

(V3/bridge)
Should I chase after you
Should I grab the next plane
Should I meet you at the end
Tell you I'm the one to blame
Should I try to explain
Should I help you figure out
That I am all you need
There never was a doubt

(Chorus x 2)
I'm fighting back the tears
I'm fighting yesterday
I need one minute
So I can explain, girl
I'm fighting back the tears
I'm fighting yesterday
The slivers in my heart
The slivers in my heart

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: AndyG6508 on March 02, 2010, 11:56:50 AM

Cass and Ray,

A very nice track. Good change of pace for the bridge/breakdown.

Love the unison guitars and bass arrangement, the solo and great drums too.

Strong lyrics.

Andy

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: PVD on March 02, 2010, 11:58:22 AM

Everyone:

Nice feel, well done.

Paul

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: cyclone on March 02, 2010, 03:18:20 PM

All Good
Nice one Ray Cas And John

                   cyclone

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: NickT on March 02, 2010, 03:57:52 PM

Wow Ray!

Another great tune. You've been sandbaging.

Cool Lyrics Casia and solid drums John!

Nick

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Sharpola on March 02, 2010, 05:09:58 PM

Thanks guys!

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Casia - lyricist on March 02, 2010, 06:14:02 PM

Absolutely beautiful Ray .... thank you  :).   How many songs have we done together now, an albums worth I think!

Casia x

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: McLovin on March 02, 2010, 07:03:13 PM

Great Song and Lyric. :)

Really really like the chords in the second halves of the chorus!

Killer solo!

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Sharpola on March 03, 2010, 12:52:39 AM

Thanks guys!

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Thunder on March 03, 2010, 11:47:18 AM

Nice groove ;)

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Donna on March 05, 2010, 08:08:07 AM

Really nice groove indeed.  ;)

Good collab, you two. :)

Donna

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Studioplayer on March 05, 2010, 11:35:13 AM

Well done Ray. Interesting groove. Casia's words work well with you. Put an album together. I'd buy one.  :)

Dave

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Stoney on March 05, 2010, 02:57:17 PM

Well done Ray John and Cas

Another cool and catchy song

Nice

Ian  :)

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Casia - lyricist on March 06, 2010, 01:33:07 PM

Ray and I have now done ten songs together and two in the mix = 12  :).  I think I'll set up a page for us Ray on CBC Radio 3.

Intoxicated
Fighting Yesterday
Your Love
Tin Man
Midnight Town
Error 500
The Easy Life
Crazy Sadie
Into Me
My Bohemian Lover
The Girl With The Floppy Hat (in the mix)
Avalon (in the mix)

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Sharpola on March 06, 2010, 03:56:47 PM

Cool  :) :) :)

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: CosmicDolphin on March 06, 2010, 05:23:44 PM

Nice arrangement , I like the main guitar part... works really well with the drums.  Cool.

CD

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Sharpola on March 07, 2010, 02:33:48 PM

Spasibo!

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: stoman on March 08, 2010, 01:58:30 PM

The song is very nice. The mix is not bad either. I would reduce the middle frequencies of the instruments a little though.

Great playing (and singing :) ) by everyone!

Regards,
  Steffen

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Torren61 on March 11, 2010, 05:32:11 PM

This is a great song.

Title: Re: Fighting Yesterday - Sharpola / Casia / Jwoo
Post by: Sharpola on March 14, 2010, 06:26:54 PM

Thanks guys!

Ray