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Title: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: detune on March 31, 2010, 12:57:03 AM

The mix could be better, and will be once I have a treated room ;)

Thanks to everyone who contributed!


Bobby Watson (Bobby) - Guitars, Piano
Mike Woodford (snowdoguk) - Lead Guitar
Neal Van (OcalaMusician) - bass
Steve Gardner (stevegardner) - Drums
Mark Lee Fletcher (detune) - composition, lyrics, vocals, backup vocals, mix


Erase - Copyright 1999 Mark Lee Fletcher

I wanna say I'm sorry for the other night
You know how I hate for us to get in a fight
I said some things to you that were really cruel
Now there's one thing that I'd like you to do

Erase this little moment from history
Erase this little moment that's been hauntin' me
Erase this little moment so you won't see
The kinda man that I can be

I really lost my temper and I wasn't so kind
I know there's no excuse and there's not one I can find
I hope that you'll forgive me cause I'm askin' ya to
And there is one more thing that I'm askin' of you

Erase this little moment from history
Erase this little moment that's been hauntin' me
Erase this little moment so you won't see
The kinda man that I can be

I don't wanna keep this in my memory
Playin' on in my mind continually
As soon as I forget you'll bring it up again
Just as soon as we have a little argument

Erase this little moment from history
Erase this little moment that's been hauntin' me
Erase this little moment so you won't see
The kinda man that I can be

I've done some stupid things but this one takes the cake
It's not like me at all it's just one big mistake
I ask you as a confidant as much as a friend
And I know I've asked before but I'll ask you again

Erase this little moment from history
Erase this little moment that's been hauntin' me
Erase this little moment so you won't see
The kinda man that I can be

Erase this little moment from history
Erase this little moment that's been hauntin' me
Erase this little moment so I won't see
The kinda man that I can be
The kinda man that I should be

Title: Re: Erase (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: mickbrit55 on March 31, 2010, 04:37:41 AM

Nicely done chaps! Had me yeehawin' and line dancing round the kitchen with the dog :)

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: detune on March 31, 2010, 09:39:41 AM

Thanks Mick!  :)

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: Benny on March 31, 2010, 10:18:53 AM

Nice catchy number here. Good job!

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: Studioplayer on March 31, 2010, 01:19:57 PM

Sweet. Love that guitar tone in the lead bit. Very nice. I always dig Marks vocals. Nice tune guys  8)

Dave

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: snowdoguk on March 31, 2010, 02:46:08 PM

Crikey.. I'd forgotten all about this .. great to see it in the finished section... was a real departure from my usual mayhem... so thank you Mark for letting me play on this...  sounds real cool ...

Well played everyone..

Cheers
Mike

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: CosmicDolphin on March 31, 2010, 03:02:06 PM

Nice one Mark  , a little different from the Rock stuff  :)

CD

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: detune on March 31, 2010, 05:56:47 PM

Thanks guys!

Mike, it was a pleasure! :)

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: Tricia41 on March 31, 2010, 09:58:05 PM

Very nice writing, Marc!  :)  Very catchy! Guitars sound nice. 8)

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: detune on April 01, 2010, 06:06:39 PM

Thanks for the kind words Tricia!  I don't know how Mike got that pedal steel sound but it's very cool, isn't it?

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: PVD on April 01, 2010, 09:55:39 PM

Everyone:

Very nice feel, smooth.  Enjoyed the listen.

Paul

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: Stoney on April 03, 2010, 01:50:35 AM

Very VERY catchy Mark ...great stuff and I never thought Mike could get those sounds LOL

Well done all

Ian  :)

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: Donna on April 03, 2010, 03:28:30 AM

This is so fine.  ;D  Mark, I had no idea you were a "closet" country singer.  ;)

Well done all round, lads.  :)

Donna

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: detune on April 03, 2010, 11:26:24 AM

Thanks so much folks! 

Donna, the accent is real.  I live in New Jersey now but I hail from Northeast Tennessee, the birthplace of country music. :)

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: riggorog on April 04, 2010, 01:30:05 AM

I like it Mark! Great job everybody :)

Title: Re: Erase - Finished (Detune/Bobby/Snowdog/Neal/SteveGardner)
Post by: Paulo on April 17, 2010, 03:26:28 AM

Very cool tune guys.