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Title: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 17, 2010, 12:26:33 AM
This is a version that I can listen to  :) Jay did a fantastic vocal job on this along side Micks brilliant guitar work...I have spent a bit of time with further track development and overall I am very pleased with the result
The original song came from an odd little song that bugged me for years every time I picked up an acoustic guitar so it is brilliant to get not one but two versions recorded

Vocals - Jay  (HDA)
Electric Guitar - Mick  (Mickbrit55)
Music/Lyrics/Drums/Guitar/Vocal/Keys/Prod - Ian  (Stonehead)

That Girl Shines - Burrage 98

V1
I love that girl over there
That girl shines
That girl shines
Her clothes her face the way she wears her hair
That girl shines
That girl shines
But I hate the way she looks through me

V2
If God made me blind I still could see
That girl shines
That girl shines
I'd be the ground she walks and the air she breathes
That girl shine
That girl shines
But I hate the way
yes I hate the way
I hate the way she looks

(Through Me)

V3
I need that girl Over there
That girl shines
That girl shines
I'd die for one look glance or stare
That girl shines
That girl shines
But I hate the way
yes I hate the way
I hate the way she looks

(Through Me)

Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: mickbrit55 on May 17, 2010, 03:54:21 AM
Big kudos to Jay ... he made her shine brighter :) Awesome job guys!

Mick.
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: AndyG6508 on May 17, 2010, 09:22:22 AM
Guys,

Another very enjoyable version of the song! Super vocals, playing and production!

Stoney keep them coming - you're going to end up with a double album.

Andy
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: McLovin on May 17, 2010, 11:59:49 AM
Just another shade of an already fantasically strange song!  Thanks for letting me sing guys. :)

Ian,... now that you "can listen to this",..I'm gonna have to get you to sing mine, so I can listen to those. ;)
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: snowdoguk on May 17, 2010, 12:14:51 PM
cool version of this song guys, well done

Mike
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 17, 2010, 12:31:40 PM
Cheers Andy and Mike

....Jay I could never do that to you..You have a brilliant musical voice not like my old croak...you are always welcome on my daft tracks.

Thanks Ian  ;D ;D
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: soulfrontier on May 18, 2010, 01:49:42 AM
a perfect song and great work by you all! I love the power in that song. Vocals are outstanding.

Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: docca3 on May 18, 2010, 07:53:49 AM
fantastic guys  ... another one to add to my MCS playlist :D
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 18, 2010, 01:26:46 PM
Cheers Andy and Holger  :)
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: NickT on May 18, 2010, 05:00:28 PM
Really enjoyed this! Something different. :)

Nick
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 19, 2010, 12:35:12 AM
Thank you Nick  :)
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Pleasuredome on May 19, 2010, 07:44:09 AM
 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 19, 2010, 01:16:10 PM
LOL and a huge bucket of  8) back in your direction Steve

Many thanks Ian
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: CosmicDolphin on May 19, 2010, 04:01:57 PM
Interesting song and really well played.

I would say a tad more bottom end on the mastering would shine it to perfection  ;)

CD
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: riggorog on May 19, 2010, 08:30:26 PM
I agree. This is song is different, but really cool I think :) Excellent job on the vocals Jay! Great work by all as usual :)

Roger
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 21, 2010, 02:06:47 PM
Cheers Roger  :)

Thanks for the feedback CD ...This is the first track on new monitors and I was disturbed just how dull they made everything sound...I think I have gone a little the other way now so I will have to learn to compromise...I think I will post a tweaked mix over the weekend

Ta  Ian  :)
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: CosmicDolphin on May 21, 2010, 04:07:31 PM
Cheers Roger  :)

Thanks for the feedback CD ...This is the first track on new monitors and I was disturbed just how dull they made everything sound...I think I have gone a little the other way now so I will have to learn to compromise...I think I will post a tweaked mix over the weekend

Ta  Ian  :)

Yeah it's actually a little bright on my system  ,  but it was the lack of bass that was more apparent.

What monitors did you get ?

CD
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 21, 2010, 04:25:33 PM
MMmmmm...I need to buy some studio monitors....I have been using a set of hand built monitors from a local engineer but the woofer cones have taked a real battering and the outer rings have started breaking free.... so I have a set of small high quality Yamaha hifi speakers that boast "Natural Sound" but I'm sure they have the usual artificial bass boost which is disappointing but they will have to do for a while...I just need to listen to some ref material for a few hours....money is very VERY tight at the moment and I dont want to waste money on poor performing monitors so any suggestions would be appreciated. ::)
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: CosmicDolphin on May 21, 2010, 05:18:28 PM
MMmmmm...I need to buy some studio monitors....I have been using a set of hand built monitors from a local engineer but the woofer cones have taked a real battering and the outer rings have started breaking free.... so I have a set of small high quality Yamaha hifi speakers that boast "Natural Sound" but I'm sure they have the usual artificial bass boost which is disappointing but they will have to do for a while...I just need to listen to some ref material for a few hours....money is very VERY tight at the moment and I dont want to waste money on poor performing monitors so any suggestions would be appreciated. ::)

Well there's alot of good monitors in all price ranges...I like my Adam A7's...lot of folks reccomend some of the Genelecs

CD
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: mickbrit55 on May 21, 2010, 05:33:04 PM
I was just reading about the A7's, they look pretty cool. At B&H you can buy a used pair for $375.

http://www.bhphotovideo.com/bnh/controller/home?O=&sku=437137&Q=&is=REG&A=details (http://www.bhphotovideo.com/bnh/controller/home?O=&sku=437137&Q=&is=REG&A=details)

Mick.
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 22, 2010, 02:02:42 AM
Thanks for that guys the A7's look nice as well  :)...I will have to save my pennies

Cheers Ian
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: CosmicDolphin on May 22, 2010, 04:13:00 AM
Thanks for that guys the A7's look nice as well  :)...I will have to save my pennies

Cheers Ian

They just upgraded them to A7x  :'(
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 22, 2010, 05:05:21 AM
Ha dont they always LOL  >:(
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: stoman on May 22, 2010, 02:36:10 PM
You have good reason to be satisfied with this result! :)

Bravo, guys!

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: That Girl Shines (HDA) Stoney/Mick/Jay
Post by: Stoney on May 23, 2010, 12:34:12 AM
Cheers Steffen....very kind  :)