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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Vincent on May 24, 2010, 07:39:47 PM

Title: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: Vincent on May 24, 2010, 07:39:47 PM

Vincent        (Composer,Writer,Acoustic Guitar,Backup Vocals,Mix)
Tricia           (Composer,Writer,Vocals,Lyrics,Vocal Melody)
mickbrit55     (Electric Guitar)
GuitarGeorge (Bass)
Jman            (Drums)

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The Sweetest Apple

Tricia Dovidio (c) 2010

a warm wind blowing on a sunny day
the perfect time to play
flowers growing and the birds do sing
we're soaking up everything

now baby take my hand
lets walk this wondrous land
and if I decide to run
you be sure to chase me

if you lift me up real high
I know I'll reach the blue sky
I'll pick the sweetest apple too
I know just how to please you

and if we tire at last
we can lie down in the tall grass
if the warm breeze turns to cols
you'll have me to hold

a warm wind blowing on a sunny day
the perfect time to play
flowers growing and the birds do sing
we're soaking up everything

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: Tricia41 on May 24, 2010, 07:52:07 PM

Great work everyone!  :) This is a fun song.

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: PVD on May 24, 2010, 09:18:46 PM

Everyone:

Good listen, smooth feel.  Tric, I think your vocals could be more upfront, just my feel.

Paul

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: Vincent on May 25, 2010, 01:23:40 AM

Thanks for the feedback PVD

I did some tweaking on the mix...sounds a bit better now

 8)

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: cyclone on May 25, 2010, 08:50:52 AM

Love this song great job everyone.Sorry I couldn`t contribute anything.Had surgery a couple weeks ago just now trying to get out of the funk.

                                        cyclone

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: Tricia41 on May 25, 2010, 09:06:59 AM

I hope you feel better soon, Cyclone!  :-[

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: cyclone on May 26, 2010, 12:07:55 AM

Thank you much Tricia.

                     cycloone

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: soulfrontier on June 01, 2010, 01:19:40 AM

 :)
I really love this song. Reminds me of Led Zeppelin and Fleetwood Mac. The good old times  :)
What a lovely  tune. great music, lyrics and vocals!
well done crew!

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: Tricia41 on June 01, 2010, 04:21:51 AM

 :) Thanks so much Holgier!  :)

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: nitch on June 01, 2010, 05:46:20 AM

I want to hear a follow-up to this song.  This sounds fantastic!

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: CosmicDolphin on June 01, 2010, 01:14:47 PM

Good stuff , has a retro vibe to it...like the backing vocals.

CD

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: Stoney on June 01, 2010, 01:51:08 PM

A great retro summer sound to this....fantastic song for an out door festival

Cool

Ian

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: snowdoguk on June 03, 2010, 06:05:28 AM

ahhh the sweetest apple, the sweetest voice... very airy song and the acoustic guitar sounds great rounded off by some tasteful licks from Mick... bass and drums are tasteful (could have been a bit more up front in the mix for my taste)....

Well done everyone
Mike

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: Tricia41 on June 03, 2010, 06:40:25 AM

 :) :) Thanks so much, Mike  :) and Ian., :) Cd, and Nitch!

Title: Re: The Sweetest Apple
Post by: Vincent on June 03, 2010, 11:41:36 AM

Thanks for the comments

Im probably going to remix this song again...It didnt turn out exactly how I wanted it to in regards to final mix.

Definately can sound better.