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Title: Love's Crime
Post by: Casia - lyricist on June 20, 2010, 03:33:23 PM

Love's Crime
Casia - Lyric
Mark Meeker - original composition
Tony Don - re-created the composition / mix
Judy Teo - vocals
Mario Spampinato- Bass
Lino Muoio- Guitar

(V1)
Crawl...(crawl)
Fall...(fall)
Your life is on call
Love is temporary
When you're walking on walls

Run...(run)
Fun...(fun)
Have your day in the sun
It won't get any better
When you're eating your crumbs

(Chorus)
What you see is not what you get
Temporary has been heaven sent
Just like the blind leading the blind
It's easy to get lost in your love's crime, Ohhhh

(V2)
Say...(say)
Play...(play)
Give your love away
It's just too painful
At the end of the day

Try...(try)
Fly...(fly)
I'm not ready to die
But it feels that way
When you're saying good-bye

(Chorus)
What you see is not what you get
Temporary has been heaven sent
Just like the blind leading the blind
It's easy to get lost in your love's crime

- solo -

Woah hohohoho
Woah ho
Woah hohohohoho
Yeah

(Bridge)
Can you understand when you're not whole
Love is respite and you didn't know
Did you know you're eating crow
The bad taste in your mouth puts your life on hold
Get a grip
Take a trip
One kiss
On the lips
And you'll know
That's it...that's it - Owwwww

(V1)
Crawl...(crawl)
Fall...(fall)
Your life is on call
Love's temporary
When you walk on walls

Run..(run)
Fun...(fun)
Have your day in the sun
It won't get any better
When you're eating your crumbs

(Chorus)
What you see is not what you get
Temporary has been heaven sent
Just like the blind leading the blind
It's easy to get lost in your love's crime

Crawl...(crawl)
Fall...(Ooooo)
Your love is on call
Your love is on call
Run...(run)
Fun...(fun)
Whooow
Have your day in the sun, Ohhhh

Title: Re: Love' Crime
Post by: j on June 22, 2010, 11:21:45 AM

hmmm :)

I'm glad to see the song is finished.

Title: Re: Love' Crime
Post by: Mr. Mom on June 23, 2010, 09:23:13 AM

This is ABSOLUTELY amazing, Casia! I love Judy's vocals, AND the score, AND the lyrics. 8)

Title: Re: Love' Crime
Post by: Casia - lyricist on June 23, 2010, 10:17:52 AM

Thanks Mr. Mom.  Judy is doing a Christmas song for me too, that'll be interesting.

Jay - yes, it's nice to get this one done, since 2008 since Mark got busy with real life.  I don't even know his last name.  I did try to reach him several times and I left the link for the song.  He responded once but was busy with life and a "flood".  I'm not exactly sure why your mix wasn't used!!  Guess Don decided to take it in another direction and save time to move on with other projects.

Casia x

Title: Re: Love's Crime
Post by: j on June 23, 2010, 06:55:00 PM

Cas,

His name is Mark Meeker. I never did get to submit final tracks, as the communication ceased for me as well. But this did turn out better than where it was left. Congratulations to all for a polished performance!

Title: Re: Love's Crime
Post by: Casia - lyricist on June 23, 2010, 07:06:13 PM

Thanks for that Jay, I'll change the credits.

Title: Re: Love's Crime
Post by: PVD on June 24, 2010, 06:33:26 PM

Good listen, well structured.

Paul