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Title: LET YOU GO
Post by: McLovin on July 09, 2010, 03:28:11 PM

Thanks a ton for the help with this guys!  Ya'll rock! ;) :)

Guitars - Doc
Drumz - Jwoo
Bass - ElevenFiftyEight
Words and Music - HDA
Vocals/Keys/Mix - HDA

LET YOU GO                               HDA 2009
V1
You and I exist alone
Burdened by this love weve never shown
Constant dreams and schemes so you might find me
You never find me

V2
With just a word my body aches
If a touch and taste, this life forsakes
Everything I've sworn in vain, do you love me
The way you loved me

CH
Baby if your feeling lost and lonely
Just remember that i'll never let you go
Your the only one that's ever know me
Though I'm dying I will always love you so

V3
All at once we drift away
Torn by foolish thoughts these strings all frey
Now we cry, must say goodbye, I adore you,  i adore you

CH

BRIDGE
Only time can heal the aching
Distance is making
My heart is breaking

CH X2

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: nitch on July 09, 2010, 04:45:31 PM

Easy listening, I like it.  Great job everyone, I especially like the piano and vocals.

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: snowdoguk on July 09, 2010, 10:39:09 PM

Really nice song... fantastic vocal performance as always, love the feeling you put into your performances Jay.... well done everyone

Cheers
Mike

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: McLovin on July 10, 2010, 06:12:13 AM

Nitch... Thanks for the listen and the comments.  Harmony textures for me are like icing.  Gotta love multitracking. ;)

Mike...  I am very glad the feel came across in this.  I'm really glad you liked it.  Thanks for stopping in. :)

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: Paulo on July 10, 2010, 08:29:32 AM

Jay, I love this... Your tunes always reminds me of the greatest hits, really.
It's always solid and coherent.

and a great set of players in here.
John
Doc

And someone I don't know at this point and did a great job "ElevenFiftyEight"... Cool bass line, my friend.

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: robmik59 on July 10, 2010, 04:38:35 PM

Jay

Your words are wonderful, full of passion and heart-felt honesty..loved them very much!...Mike

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: Billy on July 11, 2010, 01:53:23 AM

Jay and chaps - This is as good as you'll hear anywhere. A very stylish and well produced song (what else would I expect from you guys)
I really enjoyed the listen.

Billy. 

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: r4m on July 11, 2010, 11:44:02 AM

Oh yea! Very catchy, addictive tune! That is what makes a great pop tune, which this is!!! ;)
Great job by all involved! Love the octive riff doc really adds mood! Then when the B3 comes in with the octive riff, it is INSANE COOL!!!! 8) 8) 8) 8)
Great job John and  ElevenFiftyEight as well! Nice and tight!!

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: McLovin on July 11, 2010, 03:40:01 PM

Paulo/Rob/Billy/Bill:

Thank you so much for the comments.  My songs don't go much further than these forums so,.. nice to see someone else has an enjoyable listen.

Doc does such a great job at layering guitars and producing melodies for my tunes,.. I get to sit back and watch the creative process happen.

John jumped on this as quick as I posted it.  Was so happy he did,..exactly what the song needed.

Elevenfiftyeight is Scott,... just an amazing all around musician/producer and an incredibly talented bass player.  I look forward to more work with him.

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: docmidnite on July 12, 2010, 02:13:59 AM

Quote from: HDA on July 11, 2010, 03:40:01 PM

My songs don't go much further than these forums so,.. nice to see someone else has an enjoyable listen.

Listening to your songs is as enjoyable as playing for them, Jay :) So thanks again, my brother!

These songs should go way much further than just to some internetforums, bro!

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: LINO (EVP Eventual Productions) on July 12, 2010, 08:30:57 AM

Great song Jay as usually!!!

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: McLovin on July 12, 2010, 11:16:18 AM

Thanks Doc and Lino!

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: AndyG6508 on July 12, 2010, 12:58:37 PM

Jay,

Another immaculate performance. You do this style so well!!.

Very melodic. Great write, performance and mix!

Andy

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: McLovin on July 12, 2010, 07:03:36 PM

Thanks Andy! ;) :)

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: jwoo10 on July 12, 2010, 11:05:59 PM

Oh..... I'm sooooooooo SOLD! YES!

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: CosmicDolphin on July 13, 2010, 11:39:11 AM

This is very well performed and produced....Was that Doc on the acoustic....he never told us he had one  >:D.  It's the most polished song I've heard on here for quite some time. Relly fine stuff.

CD

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: McLovin on July 13, 2010, 11:40:55 AM

Thanks so much for the comments CD.  Ya I made doc pull out 3 different acoustics for this one.  Not much that guy can't do! ;)

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: docmidnite on July 13, 2010, 12:30:38 PM

Yeah Martin, Gibson, Taylor  :P
 ;D ;D ;D

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: Studioplayer on July 13, 2010, 03:54:24 PM

Jay & Crew. VERY !! NICE!!  8) 8) 8) 8)  Fantastic vocals Jay. Beautifully done guys. Definitely top notch stuff. You should be proud.  :)

Dave

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: McLovin on July 14, 2010, 11:20:24 AM

Thanks Dave! ;)

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: Donna on July 15, 2010, 10:39:26 AM

Such a pretty melody.  :) Lovely smooth sound all round, gentlemen.  ;)
Jay, your vocals just get better and better.  :D

Donna

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: Mr. Mom on August 27, 2010, 05:26:55 PM

Awesome song Jay and crew (JCrew)
This thing is just as intense as it is mellow, hard to get that kind of blend. Sounds great. 8)

John

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: stoman on August 29, 2010, 01:36:03 AM

This is really first class, guys! Great songs here of late ... :)

Regards,
  Steffen

Title: Re: LET YOU GO
Post by: McLovin on August 29, 2010, 01:02:52 PM

Donna, John and Steffen,

Thanks for listening and the great feedback!