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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Billy on August 22, 2010, 04:02:38 PM

Title: So Tired
Post by: Billy on August 22, 2010, 04:02:38 PM

I came up with what was a sketch for a song and I asked Jay if he'd like to write some lyrics for it. He not only wrote the lyrics, he also came up with some sterling vocals which brought the song to life. What a decent chap!

Thank you for listening!

Lyrics, all vocals composed and performed by Jay Lamothe (HDA)

All music composed and produced by Billy Playle


                                                                         So Tired                                     HDA 2010

V1

How long, can this pace continue,
Making time for something more, but more is just a lost intention
Won't wait, my life has no connection,
To the things that matter most, but what matters most the greatest question.

CH1

So tired and I need some sleep, it's only when I dream that I can see the prize
So dire yet I'm digging deep, gonna test the theory, if I can arrive, to the end alive

V2

Somehow, I'm gonna make a difference,
Taking all they're loading on, never saying no won't make it
Pain sits, buried not forgotten,
How the hell am I holding on, as a tattered wire unwinds don't shake it

CH2

So tired and I need some sleep, it's only when I dream that I can see the prize
So dire yet I'm digging deep, gonna test the theory, if I can arrive, to the end alive
 
BRIDGE

To the end alive....

V3

Hold strong, just a wasted virtue,
Listen to the things I state, but never match my disposition
Escape, the chains of lost conviction,
Do it now or be too late, cuz comfort is the final mission

CH2

So tired and I need some sleep, it's only when I dream that I can see the prize
So dire yet I'm digging deep, gonna test the theory, if I can arrive, to the end alive

Title: Re: So Tired
Post by: Mr. Mom on August 22, 2010, 04:14:07 PM

Very nice Jay and Billy.
As soon as I know the 2 of you are combining talents on a song, I'm there. 8)
You each have a style that compliments the other, it's always pleasurable to the ears. :)

John

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Post by: McLovin on August 22, 2010, 05:02:27 PM

Hey there it is!  Really sweat mix Billy and that solo after the bridge is crazyness!

Thanks for the invite.  Always a pleasure!

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Post by: riggorog on August 22, 2010, 05:28:44 PM

Very nice guys! Always top notch when you guys get together :)

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Post by: PVD on August 22, 2010, 08:43:47 PM

Guys:

Good listen, very smooth.

Paul

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Post by: Paulo on August 24, 2010, 07:04:48 AM

Sweet.

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Post by: stoman on August 24, 2010, 11:11:51 AM

Killer vocals! Wow, I really love Jay's way of singing.

No need to mention Billy's great composing, arranging and playing skills.

Jazz and pop united in the best of possible ways. :)

Regards,
  Steffen

Title: Re: So Tired
Post by: Studioplayer on August 24, 2010, 01:57:44 PM

Very nice. The music fits Jays vocals like a glove. Nice one guys!!  8) 8)

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Post by: Vincent on August 24, 2010, 03:24:13 PM

Nice easy listening song.... 8)

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Post by: Tricia41 on August 24, 2010, 03:25:55 PM

Oooooh....another nice one. Sweet.  8)

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Post by: Mimmo on August 24, 2010, 03:50:39 PM

enjoyed listening to this song.
Great job guys.

Mimmo

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Post by: r4m on August 24, 2010, 05:09:15 PM

The Dynamic Duo strikes again!!! >:D
Great stuff as I figured!! ;)
You guys are insane!! :D

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Post by: Albino on August 24, 2010, 05:21:44 PM

Wow, what a great track.
Well produced, well written and well performed.

Such a smooth track, I loved it.

It was so smooth that it should help that insomnia problem!!

Excellent!!

Steve :D

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Post by: Benny on August 24, 2010, 05:45:46 PM

Oh baby, this is so good. Beautifully produced gentlemen! 8)

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Post by: gbm on August 24, 2010, 06:12:12 PM

wow nice! music and vocals, awesome!

 :)

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Post by: CosmicDolphin on August 25, 2010, 05:58:15 PM

Very Smooth !

Great Vocals Jay...Nice mix Sir Billy  8)

CD

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Post by: docmidnite on September 01, 2010, 02:24:54 AM

A Grammy for the vocal arrangement!
Super!

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Post by: jwoo10 on September 01, 2010, 10:50:09 AM

Ohhh.. THIS is a Great track. Tasty, Very well written, very well performed, and the production is Grade "A"!

Kudos to the both of you!