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Title: Just a lie
Post by: Captain fantastic on December 09, 2010, 12:33:58 PM
This is a collaboration between ,Captain fantastic,severing & mark,The mighty severing still wants to improve upon the song,but I thought I would post it to see what you folks think.
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: CosmicDolphin on December 10, 2010, 04:18:11 AM
I think it sounds good as it is, I don''t know what changes the mighty severing had in mind but it sounds pretty finiished to me.  It's kinda hypnotic...took a little longer than I wanted to get to the vocals but it's very atmospheric and almost soundtrack like.

CD
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: Severing on December 10, 2010, 07:37:48 AM
These guys kicked ass making this music.  I am taking it to a pro studio next week to redo the vocals, It will be a good test regarding the validity of 2000 dollar condenser mics and tube compressors  ;)
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: McLovin on December 10, 2010, 11:55:59 AM
NICE FEEL!

Post the lyrics when ya get a chance. ;) 8)
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: Severing on December 10, 2010, 01:58:26 PM
How could I be
What was this before
I came to see
You on the floor
How cold
I can be
Severing ties
You can't understand

 C. When a candle burns from both ends you think you're bright
But that's just a lie

How can this become
Forever night
The beginning was strong
Now the ends in sight
You can't
Understand
Severing ties
How cruel I can be

C.

And you wandered baby like a leaf in the breeze
And you wondered maybe till you crashed into me

And I thought you said you were on your way now
And I thought you said that you were on your way now.
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: stoman on December 12, 2010, 02:35:43 AM
Very nice idea! The guitars sound great. The overall mix may need a little more work, but I enjoyed listening to it as is.

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: AndyG6508 on December 13, 2010, 04:26:01 PM
Nice one guys.

Great performance from everyone.

A different sort of sound - very welcome too.

The mix is quite good, thought the bass needed more presence or level or defintion - or any comb of all three!!

Well done

Andy
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: Captain fantastic on December 14, 2010, 11:32:58 AM
Nice one guys.

Great performance from everyone.

A different sort of sound - very welcome too.

The mix is quite good, thought the bass needed more presence or level or defintion - or any comb of all three!!

Well done

Andy
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My bass is always lacking a bit,I suppose because it is not my choice of instrument(& I only use a cheap one),thanks for the feedback.
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: Captain fantastic on December 14, 2010, 11:34:22 AM
Very nice idea! The guitars sound great. The overall mix may need a little more work, but I enjoyed listening to it as is.

Regards,
  Steffen
Glad you enjoyed it.
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: Albino on December 14, 2010, 01:10:48 PM
Pertty cool.
Reminded me of Alice in Chains (Sap/Jar of flies) and Pink Floyd.

Cool.
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: docmidnite on December 15, 2010, 03:23:12 AM
Great song, super arrangement... overall mix deserves more work  ;)
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: Studioplayer on December 15, 2010, 05:00:18 PM
Nice one guys. Moody.  8)

Dave
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: Stoney on December 16, 2010, 01:58:10 PM
Very nice feel to this and I can hear the AIC sound in the vocal treatment too

Nice Stuff

Ian
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: snowdoguk on December 17, 2010, 03:34:15 PM
Sounds really good .... nice haunting guitar work.... vocals are brilliant....
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: Severing on December 20, 2010, 08:47:55 AM
Thanks for all the feedback guys, and thanks to MCS for making this possible!
Title: Re: Just a lie
Post by: Paulo on December 23, 2010, 01:01:36 PM
When I heard the initial drum's beat I thought

It's one o'clock and time for lunch,dum dee dummmm dee dum.
When the sun beats down and I lie on the bench
I can always hear them talk.


Very nice tune, very well put together.