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Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Davidinoz on October 01, 2006, 07:54:50 PM

Title: She's My Lady
Post by: Davidinoz on October 01, 2006, 07:54:50 PM: I'm calling this done. Thanks to all who contributed.

Davidinoz (David Timson) Writer music, bass, guitar, mix and master.
Paul (Paul Townsend) Writer lyrics and melody, vocals.
Studioplayer (Dave Patterson) guitar and hater of muddy mixes.
Guitargeorge (George Williams) guitar solo.
Paulo (Paulo Gomes) Hammond, piano.
Digitaldrummer (Mike Kosacek) drums.

Lyrics:

SHE'S MY LADY

[VERSE 1]
Have you seen my follicly challenged bride?
Hair pulled back so tight, with a chest one meter wide

[CHORUS]
She's my lady!!! She's my lady
She's my lady, my l-l-l-l-lady

[VERSE 2]
Walks like John Wayne, talks like Johnny Cash
Takes her lines and rhymes from Crosby, Stills and Nash

[CHORUS]
She's my lady!!! She's my lady
She's my lady, my l-l-l-l-lady

[VERSE 3]
So why cant you see?
She's as good as she can be
Got a heart like Ma Teresa
Aint no guy on earth can phaze her
Take a look, cant you see
She's as pretty as can be
Got a face like Mona Lisa
All she needs is some degreaser...

[CHORUS]
She's my lady!!! She's my lady
She's my lady, my l-l-l-l-lady
She's my lady!!! She's my lady
She's my lady, my l-l-l-l-lady
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: groverk on October 01, 2006, 08:18:35 PM: Catchy, I like it.

Nice job everyone.

Who did the drums ?

Ken
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Davidinoz on October 01, 2006, 08:29:14 PM: Quote from: groverk on October 01, 2006, 08:18:35 PM
Catchy, I like it.

Nice job everyone.

Who did the drums ?

Ken

Sorry :-[. Post corrected.
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: NickT on October 01, 2006, 08:42:07 PM: Sounds Great!

Reminds me of Faces. Nice feel.

Good work all!

Nick
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Post by: Studioplayer on October 01, 2006, 09:35:46 PM: Jeez, I make some honest feedback comments and he cuts me out of the solo. :'( Hater of muddy mixes ? Ok... I guess I did overstate that. ;D

Honestly it sounds good. Glad you made some decisions and saw it through. Good rockin' tune 8)
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Post by: napoleonboot on October 02, 2006, 01:51:13 AM: It sounds good - GG

My first at MCS. :)
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Paulo on October 02, 2006, 03:08:14 AM: Sounds good, David.

My first finished one at Musicians Collaboration :)
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Davidinoz on October 02, 2006, 09:51:02 AM: Sounds like a few firsts on this one - its the first thing I've ever written ;D

Dave - don't be downhearted about the solo. I love the tone of your guitar, I just liked what George played for this one. And you were right of course about the mud in that mix :)
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Studioplayer on October 02, 2006, 01:08:02 PM: No problem man. Just joking. Like I said.. "use what works for the song".

A fun song. Congrats on your first write. 8)
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Post by: Hazz on October 02, 2006, 04:57:44 PM: This is one of those tuns that makes me want to drive 100+ or go rippin' through the canyons, nice work.

HAZ
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Post by: Paul on October 04, 2006, 05:41:56 AM: Hi David!
Sorry, didnt get to listen to your latest mix till now. I think it's great, apart from the vocal being a bit too quiet. But then i would say that! Guitar solo is perfect.
Thanks for this, it was a fun project... not my usual style, but thats the good thing about collabs i always find, you try different things.
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Davidinoz on October 06, 2006, 06:28:25 AM: The vocal in the original post was a touch low as Paul has said. I've replaced the file (in the first post) with one with a better vocal balance.
BTW if anyone wants an ape let me know and I'll put it up.
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Paulo on October 06, 2006, 06:42:55 AM: I want the ape, please. i'm collecting all the stuff I've been involved to record on CD.
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Davidinoz on October 06, 2006, 06:59:46 AM: Here you go Paulo. I'll leave it up for a few days.
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Paulo on October 06, 2006, 07:02:14 AM: Thanks man... I got at least 2 or 3 CD's to record with all my litlle things.
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Post by: r4m on October 07, 2006, 11:32:32 PM: Congrats to all! Nice job!
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Post by: Davidinoz on October 08, 2006, 04:10:03 AM: Thanks Bill. :)
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Post by: Paul on October 09, 2006, 11:50:20 AM: Can you leave the ape up for a day or two longer David? I missed the latest posts (and mix) in this thread...
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Davidinoz on October 09, 2006, 04:53:44 PM: It's still there Paul. second post from the bottom on the first page.
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Post by: Paul on October 10, 2006, 03:13:05 AM: I listened to the new mix...great David!
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Post by: Studioplayer on October 16, 2006, 01:55:46 PM: David, You should be nominating this for the CD. It's a good, fun tune!!! 8)
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Davidinoz on October 16, 2006, 03:59:59 PM: Thanks for the encouragement Dave. I think there's way better stuff here than mine. maybe I'll try something for the next one. :)
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: NickT on October 16, 2006, 08:22:55 PM: Quote from: Davidinoz on October 16, 2006, 03:59:59 PM
Thanks for the encouragement Dave. I think there's way better stuff here than mine. maybe I'll try something for the next one. :)

I like this one too! 8)

Nick
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Post by: Studioplayer on October 17, 2006, 01:35:38 PM: Looks like Paulo did the dirty deed for ya. ;) hehe

I like this song. As good as they get. 8)
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Post by: cederwood on October 18, 2006, 06:13:51 AM: Someone said in the introduction page that there's a lot of talent on this site, I think this song proves that, fine lyrics + good tune.
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Davidinoz on October 18, 2006, 07:48:35 AM: Ok Ok I'm convinced ;D

Seriously thanks for the nice comments. Being a novice writer I'm still a little unsure of myself. But I do intend to keep at it. I think the bug bit me :)
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: napoleonboot on October 19, 2006, 08:19:52 AM: Paul- thanks for the compliments on the guitar solo.

All round a great song.

I never saw the faces, or small faces, but I did see Steve Marriot (shortly before his untilmely fdeath) and he was great. David - I'd love to do more like this.

George
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: stmoeller60 on November 06, 2006, 06:43:46 AM: Hi David,

I heard this once before from you somewhere else, but again , it's a nice song.
I like the vocals and the honky tonk piano from Paulo.
Sounds a bit like southern rock of the 70-80'ties, right ?
Title: Re: She's My Lady
Post by: Davidinoz on November 06, 2006, 07:27:02 AM: Thanks for the kind words Steve. The song started and finished here at MC so I couldn't have played it before.